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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

He has given her back everything that he once took.

Not everyone gets the chance to erase their mistakes, he's doing well.

Beautiful.

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

wow great update di
finally arhi are married
continue soon

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SARA

@saara76

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

"sleep like good children." haha... Lovely update

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Once again a wonderfully written update. Made us read everything we ever dreamed of. I loved Arnav's conviction on their love! Loved the ending of the update! I can't wait for more! This story is awesome! 😃

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rupzloveu

@rupzloveu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

congratsss fr new thread...

loved the update...

finalllyyy they r married...

awesomely written as always...

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Well, arnaji has succeeded in his scheme to get her married to him. It was good see him acknowledge all the hurt he has caused her with his behaviour.

The best thing he said was that he trusted her love for him. That one assertion has brought him up quite a long way in my esteem. 😃

And his acknowledgment that she is fully capable of managing on her own without needing him in any capacity in her life.

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago

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arshino1fan

@arshino1fan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

sleep like good children!!!!!! awww... arnav is sooo damn cute!!!! loved it!!!!

plz update soon..

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arpitasharma

@arpitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

I have already commented on your blog, and so I copy and pasted here too!!! 😆 So sorry for that!

...And finally they marry!

Arnav's faith in his love has admonished every other insecurity of losing her and their marriage has made their bond even stronger. It was heart-warming to see Arnav counting all his follies, yet again, to Khushi and his unwavering promise to her of reversing them and fulfilling his duty of being a good husband. And all he required was a chance from her. And she finally complied! So a party to that! He now knows that she has been marked as his, bound to him for eternity and it was impossible to break their ties anymore.

Another adorable scene was the stars hanging on top of the mandap. It was as if knowing that Khushi's parents were a witness to their marriage and the light that emanated from them was their blessings.

And of course, it was a pity that she didn't entangle herself in the fairy lights. Bechara Arnav! A second round of untangling her from the lights wouldn't have been a problem, now that they were married for a second time!

I absolutely adored the minute addition of Buaji's own comments of how she was shy as a bride and how Titliya's phoopaji had to lift the veil to see her blushing! Wonderful and bang on characterization of our adorable Buaji.

And it was nice to see Arnav bending his head down for Khushi to put the garland on him. It was as if he was bending down to her as an apology for his follies in the past and a gesture of 'thank you' for all that she had brought into his life - "happiness" and "LOVE". And of course, why wouldn't Nannav side with his wife? After all, he has promised to side with her for the rest of his life.

Arnav Bitwa has decorated the bed pertaining to his romanticism! I highly doubt if they will remain 'good' children, after all!
Now the mystery remains "Will Bitwa get his suhagraat?" Hehehe! I am kidding!

Arnav has come a long way, has seen a lot, has realized a lot, and so has Khushi. And their growing love and unwavering trust for each other is what will keep the tale going!

Thank you so much for the wonderful update.

This goes out to you as a letter of appreciation. YOU ROCK!!!