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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Smita 🤗

I know I wasnt around to give prompt comments but I read all of them as soon as Rash's mail reached me ... couldnt comment coz i read them while i was in college !! 😛

updates making me cry tooo much ... sheer beautiful gut wrenching updates ... cant wait for khushi to run back into his arms ... cant stand their pain at their seperation !!

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sphobic

@sphobic

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Rashmi di,Pang was just bang on title for part 14.

well you have explained all types of pang and i very much enjoyed reading it and understanding it.

its very heart wrenching to see both of them apart😭
and with your interpretation it becomes more touching

fabulous interpretation

Love!!!

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Wow!!

Awesome update!!

little emotional!!

Can i have the next update soon??

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sphobic

@sphobic

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

Smita di,why are you hell bent on making us cry.

that was such heart touching update.

Bhavani Shankar Tiwary...the name sounds really scary

he sounds really strict,but Arnav's jalebi rani is very well capable of impressing anyone.
khushi is really too much,she was chanting Arnav ji Arnav ji instead of her Devi Maiya😆😆

and at last you made me all emotional😭

Love!!!

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

The last two parts were so beautifully written

Yet so painful ,their pain bought tears to my

Eyes.I cant bear their separation but this is

Gonna draw them even closer to each other

And create a stronger bond between them.

The tele con was incredibly emotional , thanks

For the email rashmi , thank u smita for this

Brilliant chapter.

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Arshipriya16

@Arshipriya16

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

So our Khushi is missing him from now itself!!!!!!!!!!!! Chanting his name for getting strength & using his tricks to hide her fear.Really awesome chappy Smita di.& Tiwariji is mindblowing,agar unke jaisa head hamare India ko mil jaye to hamare Rupaiyye ko is tarah se rona nahi padega.I like this character though he is strict for everyone.He only scolds people when they didn't do their work properly,aur aisa koi kam hai jo hamari Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada nahi kar sakti??????😉😉😉.

Rashmi di awesome Interpretation I love it.Thanks for pm & mail.
Love u both.
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Ashakalyani

@Ashakalyani

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Yaar i read part 12,13,14 n 15 in one go...it made me cry...i cant see arshi like dis...both of them are hurting themselves..hope girija devi will do something to bring arshi close again...arshi is missing each other terribly...tiwari ji seems to be a nice man...waiting for the next part

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sphobic

@sphobic

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

being churned was the perfect title di!

last para of your interpretation was so touching,you very well explained Arnav's repentance...but as it is said ,"as you sow so shall you reap".
he himself have dived himself to where he is now.

di,i thought you will title it something to do with first step,as most of the update was about Khushi taking her first step and also drawing strength from Arnav by thinking about Arnav's first step in his business.

but you have explained all the different emotions Khushi goes
through while taking her first step.👏👏👏👏👏👏

Love!!!

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Mallika

@malkasub

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#659

loved your update and the interpretation. the confession to arnav that he must have gone thru the same thing was a very much needed thing. no one has ever spoken of the young boy who faced the cruel world all by himself to become such a success. no one has ever given the little boy a thought. only khushi. and not only that, she actually derives strength from those thoughts...lovely!

I keep getting the feeling of an ippknd 2 whenever I read this story.

mallika