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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

Loved d update

nd love d new cupid 😳

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Arshipriya16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

But I would love to here this from Khushi

Yaaad aa rahi hai,
teri yaad aa rahi hai,
yaad aane se tere jane se jaan ja rahi hai,
Yaaad aa rahi hai,
teri yaad aa rahi hai,😉

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seshatree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

someone please knock on the heads of these two loving fools...King Akbar maybe?

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purple_hue

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

great parts 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

Omg! 3 updates in a row!! This made my weekend! 😃
But I'm really sorry for the late comment. My hotmail was having problems with sign-in.😒

Going to the updates:

Chapter 12:

Read Rashmi's interpretation. I really like it and I had the same notion that Arnav took Khushi on a shopping spree so as to spend as much time as he can with her, and not let her mind clutter; hence, the light-hearted conversation they had.

And of course, to also make sure that she's comfortable.

Chapter 13:

Arnav was determined to make sure that she won't be helpless, and provided her a sense of monetary security. He'll be away from her, but he still possesses her, as his wife, whether she likes it or not, she's his responsibility.

"They spent their last night lying in each other's arms, both of them unable to sleep. If tears leaked out of Khushi's eyes and wet his arm, he asked no questions. He just hugged her tighter, and kissed her hair."

This line had me teary. Poor souls 😭

Chapter 14:

I really like Girija Devi. She understood something was amiss when she saw the couple. A rich husband, a simple wife. And her mind formulated various scenarios, of them being stuck in a marriage they didn't want to be in.

But thankfully, she saw the pain and misery in both Arnav and Khushi and understood that there's more than meets the eye.

So I'm assuming she'll be a major factor in reuniting these 2 lovebirds 😳

Loved them all Smita! :)

Loved your interpretations Rashmi! And thanks for the email! :)

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BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

Rashmi Di just read ur last 2 interpretation...

You are awesome...

Smita Di I read part 14 just now...my netwa was not working b4... 😡

I hope Girja Devi helps in Punar-milap of arshi... 😳

I m not liking this judai...

Smita Di for you...cuz you are the best writer...

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storytellerm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

TRIPLE UPDATE

YAYAYYY

awesome

i mean loved it

Girija Devi hit her head with her hand. Why did she feel like a cruel King Akbar who had killed Anarkali for falling in love with Salim?Akbar hehehehe its like anarkali varanasi chali chod salim ki delhi ki gali hehehe awesome She looked at her own reflection in the glass of the window. A very rotund King Akbar. comparing to akbar god its funny now even i am imagining nowShe imagined herself with a turban and a rose in her hand. And shuddered. She would have to do something about this sad Arnav Singh Raizada and his weepy wife, Khushi.

great part

loved it

Edited by sanjana yadav - 12 years ago