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Posted: 12 years ago
omg ...so khushi left ...and poor girija devi ...she thinks of herself as zalim akbar ...kya na yar ...dis was d beauty of our show ...one minute it was depressing and sad ..d other moment sumthing crazy would have happened ...our show was awesumly unique..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow
amazing,read from 10 to 14 in one go awseome.
khushi is so desperate in leaving him when she doesn't want that from heart 😭😭
and he is letting her go when he cant bear that😭 ,this is what we call true love ,beyond desires ,its about selflessness.
and that girija devi ,nice character hope she will do something good to both arshi
you made me cry when they both were bidding goodbye to eachother😭😭😭
awesome update
thanks for notifying me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
rofl...girija devi is so cute !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely update
she has even got help:-)
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome parts.. I am hoping this Girija Devi will put some sense into Khushi's brain..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely updates.. So finally she is in Varanasi.. I dont wanna see them apart...
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Posted: 12 years ago
interpretation on part 12 & 13...as always perfect Rashmi...loved them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for all the parts updated
Just read all the three parts i a go...
Wow what a fata fat updates!!
Am so so so so happy here as am getting updates like this often!! that two three updates!! thanks alot for that smitty!!!
Now lets come to the chapter,
Chapter 12
Was really fab u talked about an arnav as a lover boy!! very good indeed!!
Those people were teasing him and he didnt even roar once!! wah what an improvement :)
On the whole this update was really simple but cool!!
Chapter 13
Little emotional for me as they were spending their last night together!!
Arnav told a lie to the family and they agreed readily? what will they do if he told them the truth??
And to her family also they said they are going out for two days i mean just two days??
If they know why she left wont all these people will be guilty?? will they allow this or is he expecting her to come back soon or what?? am thinking too much and getting confused
Chapter 14
Do i even have to say anything about this chapter after all??
First thing i wanted to say before commenting about this chapter was about girija devi's thinkin :)
Have to give a big bid credit for that for you smitty:)
I mean hilarious, did she really pictured herself as a cruel king who killed anarkali for loving salim!! wah wah wah kya mazeddar thinkin hai!!! hats off!!!!
This update was simple superb!!
i just loved this arnav because he didnt throw any tanturms for leaving her like this and going back eventhough he has made all safety for her and checked everything thoroughly!!!
i liked this way in which he is giving her time to scramble all her thoughts and make something useful out it for him!! he is very polite, understanding and clear in his views!!
He doesn't want to expose his pains in front of her and wanted her to be strong and face things!!
So good of him!! he helped her in arranging her things in her room, how sweet!!!
Saying bye to the loved ones is the most painful thing that can ever happen in any one's life, but arnav has did that, just for her sake.
There is a saying or a proverb or something there which goes something like this, "if you love some one with all your heart, then you have leave them in hard situations. if the love was meant to be yours it will surely come back to you some day soon" but this soon is what a question everywhere!! time is the biggest culprit which changes our life in every micro seconds, so waiting for something which you know whether it will happen to you or not is the second painful thing in the whole world!! now arnav has to wait, even if its for a single month and his turmoil in the heart will always be there untill he find his missing part beside him.

i really want this devi to break her head because of this couple so she can put some sense in kushi and make her go back to her arnav to lead a peaceful like!! i know she is the one who is going to play a cupid in between these two and set things in their life as she will have a good terrible past in her life too!!😃😃
Pls looking forward for the next update!!
Edited by deepa.e - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for rashmi di intrepretation
Super di!!
Awesome just read interpretation of part 12 & 13!!
"CONFECTION & MOORING"
You are so right in choosing the words!!😊😊
Simply good!!
Waiting for your part 14 comments!!
Edited by deepa.e - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
love this itz super ...

Waitinng for akbar to act,,,,,

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