@Smita...
Everything was absolutely flawless and mesmerizing in both the parts,
2 (A) and 2 (B).
First comments on 2 (A)
Arnav's confession of why he wants to marry her was sooo sweet! 😳 Damn this guy will make me fall in love with him all over again! And the best dialogue was...
"I know you dont need me to do this, Khushi. I know that you are capable of rising from your ashes again. You will find a job. You will look after your family. You will live. You dont need me to do anything for you... But I need to do this, Khushi. I need to do this if I have to live on." Arnav said, his voice shaking with emotion.
I had tears in my eyes! 😭 Beautifully written! 👏 And he promised that this would be her dream wedding! This guy is sooo ADORABLE! ❤️
"Arnavji... I will marry you." Khushi said, unable to bear his pain and his guilt any longer. "But you have to promise me something."
Arnav looked at her enquiringly.
"That you will put our past out of your mind. That you wont worry about every single incident that happened between us during the last one-and"a-half years and regret them..." How could she walk away, leaving him to burn in the fire of his guilt?
Arnav kissed her hand fervently.
"I will try, Khushi. I promise I will try. Will you try with me? Can you put our past behind us? Can you forgive me? Can we start anew?" His eyes held hope, eagerness, desperation...
Khushi nodded.
She agreed to marry him???? Seriously?
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Now comments on 2 (B)
WEDDING DAY!!!!
Both looked WOW! ❤️
"Married for 6 months, and the girl is still blushing!" Nani chuckled.
Nani teasing Khushi... 😆
"Nannav is blushing too!" NK discovered.
Arnav raised an eyebrow at him, challenging his discovery silently. If there was a flush of happiness on his cheeks, he couldnt be faulted for it.
"Blushing?" Mami asked, laughing. "Pehle shaadi ho to blushing samajh aawat he, Arnav Bitwaa. But yeh to Seconds he, Hello Hi Bye Bye!"
Hahahaha!!! 🤣
Such a magical wedding! With Khushi's stars, fairy lights flowers and jalebis!
They took the saath phere, and both families sighed with happiness at the small smiles on the faces of the bride and groom.
Arnav tied her mangalsutra around her neck once more. But this time he did it with reverence. Khushi felt her eyes prick at the feeling in his eyes.
Arnav took a pinch of sindoor in his fingers. He lifted her maangtikka, kissed her maang, and placed the sindoor there.
This was so beautifully written hun! ❤️
Finally Suhaagraat is here!!!! ☺️ I was awing and smiling all the way! He helped her with the jewellary! ☺️ ummm... me blushing here! ☺️
His trust on his love for her and on her love for him is just so beautiful! He confessed to her to that if she wished to leave she could but his name would always be with her! 👏
OMG... THE CLIMAX!
Arnav proceeded to kiss her senseless, till she was a pile of mush, clinging to his broad shoulders, panting, her heart thundering away...
Khushi looked in to the molten chocolate eyes, burning with love and desire for her.
Without her knowledge, her hands crept to the neck of his T-shirt, trying to make their way in, trying to pull the cloth down, trying to touch more of his skin.
"Sshh..." Arnav warned, smiling his wicked smile. "Don't tempt me too much. My self-control has its limits. Living in the same room with you for 6 months without kissing you and making love to you has taken almost all of it, Khushi. I am hanging here by a thread, Khushi."
Khushi squirmed closer to him.
"One more kiss, that's all." Arnav declared. "After that we are going to sleep like good children."
Khushi glared at him.
Arnav burst out laughing.
Arnav being so naughty! 😉 I'm so loving it! 👏
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EVERYTHING WAS FLAWLESS! 👏
*bow down* to you Smita! ❤️
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@Rash - Thanks a ton for the PMs love.. ❤️ Love you heaps! 😳 Would wait for your emails from next time! 😳 The interpretations for the previous chapter were marvelous! 👏
A BIG HUG TO BOTH OF YOU! 🤗
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