virman and virika FF:dreams.....or kismat part 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
prologu and cs look intersting
update soon and u r other story also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Part 1:
Manvis dairy:
Dear dairy,
Today was another terrible day I was told of again when mom knew it is all rohans fault...she literally hates mw I dont know wat to do as much as I do she is never happy...ok fine by be I failed 9th class...but its not my fault...I mean I was only 11 when we moved to india because my dad did like the bf gf atmosphere ...I mean it took time to adjust. ...then in 9th when I was told to pick my subjects for o-levels I took medical for them n then when I couldnt do it they didnt even think one before bursting on me...alll my mum wants to do is look pretty try n be my sistwr...when ever im with my cousins if my mom is there I have to keep my mouth shut becuz I will get told of if I speak when shes there...I know wat u must be thinking she must love me...soo u tell me which mom stops her kids frm eating chocolate,feezy drinks and all sugary things... when I used to see other kids eat sweets,candies I used to think to myself why me...why...??
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Manvis mom:mm
Manvi:m
Rohan:r
Ria:r
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Mm:how many times have I told u not to sit in that room all day...always on ur phone...
M:I wasnt on my phone
Mm:wat were u doing then
R:she was writting something
M:shut up
Mm:u shut up and go and clean the kicken and help the worker clean the house
M:I have got homework to do
Mm:like ur gonna do anything in skool its the same everyyear sooo u might as well learn the house work becuz that all ur gonna do ur whole life...
Manvi turned around and went to the kitchen with tears in her eyes.
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Dear dairy,
Today was kinda of a better day...mum says right that wat u gonna do with ur life...well I have decied...guess wat im going london yeh after 5 years for jia(her cousin)wedding im gonna attend tthe wedding...dad finally listen toe for the first timw in my life and when I get there im gonna...gotta go mums calling.
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Ok guys thats it hope u enjoyed dont woryy virman and virika will come sooo...ok guys after every update I will ask u a question and u guys jave to answer it...
Soo the 1st Q is:
Wat do u thing manvi is gonna do?
Do u think her mom is right or is
manvi right?
Plz do answer...
I know its abit short but they will get longer dint sweat.
Nia&krystal
Edited by nia3krystal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
i guess she will just go away from her parents ...
its interesting felt sad for manvi ...
update next part soon
and also update yur other stories too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
awesome update dear 😃
Thanx 4 the Pm
update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Part 2:
Hey guys im gonna fast forward the story abit as u guyz must want virat and virika to come fast soo just alittle fast forward..
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Finally the day had come when manvi was on her way to london...which for her was like freedom...the place where she grow up n thats were she was goona get freedom now...she had got there and attended her cousins wedding...it was the night for the wedding...manvi wrote a note to her cousin saying she going to live her life n if she ever loved me she would not try n find her n pass this msg on to her parents...jia smiled to herself after reading the letter
Jia:go manvi go live ur life live ur dream...be free and I will always be with u..
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Manvi ran as fast as she could up to the train station and got n train to east london were no one would find her...
She finally got there and sat in a park for days thinking of wat to do next...she had cried all night.it was a monday morning n manvi could see skool kids on there way to skool...collegers walking around...
___:hello
Manvi turned to her side n saw a rather nice lookin lady.
Manvi:who are u
__:im jenny...I have been noticing u for many days...a.re u homeless or an orphan
Manvi:who are
Jenny:can u see that house there
Manvi looked at the place were she was pointing
Jeeny:thats a foster home ...n im the head there...
Manvi:im an orphan
Jenny:I would like to help u would u like to come in with me
Manvi though for awhile n then to herself:if I go with her I might get somewhere.
Manvi:ok
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Manvi had settled in very well in the foster home all the kids there loved her n she started enjoying it there...right now she was beging home tutored...n jenny had promised her that she would find her a family in the next 1 week.
Manvi was sitting her room...when jenny came in lookin rather excited.
Jeeny:manvi manvi I have found u a fily and there here right now waiting for u...n u know the best part tjey are indian u will fit in perfectly n they also have another daughter...they are adopting becuz there daughter wants a suster I think there perfect for ...n there down stairs right now
Manvi:wat now...ummm umm
Jenny:manvi stop panicing
Manvi:ok breath in breath out...ok im comin down...and jenny thanx u soo much
Jenny:shut up n get dressed
Manvi go out a pink and blue shalwar suit n quickly got ready as she came down she started feeling sweat on her fourhead..
Manvi:manci calm down there not gonna eat u.
She entered jenny's office n saw a lady in her 40 n I must say she was pwetty...next.to her was handsome look guy alsonin his 40s...n next to him was a girl very pwetty...she was probebly manvis age...
The girl was wearing;
http://newstrackindia.com/photogallery/images/view/2923-Alia-Bhatt-promoting-Student-of-the-Year.html(guys make sure to go on images when u type this in to google)
As manvi went in they all stood up n metlt her...when the young girl ce to hee she hugged her soo tight that she could hardly breath
__:hi im jeevika
Manvi:umm hi im im manvi
The older lady:hey im naina chopera and this is my husband mahesh chopera.
Jeevika was soo excited to meet manvi.
They began to chat and soon began to know each other they sat there for like the whole day ...manvi told her everything n jeevika promised she wouldnt tell anyone after all they were sisters .finally the paper work was all finish and jeevika and manvi came down the stairs with manvis things.
Mamvi met all the kids that she had met there and wished them the best of luck for there lives...
Manvi:bye jenny...im soo lucky that I was able to meet and lovely person like u...I dont know wat i did to deserve ur help thanx u soo much
And she hugged.
Jenny:I love u n I hope u get all u receive in life n all ur dreams come true...come to visit ok..
Manvi nodded her head through her tears...
Soon manvi left with her new family...as the car stopped manvi saw a huge mansion.it was the most beautiful thing manvi had ever seen( like kajol and sharuks house in kabhi kushi kabhi gham)
Jeevika:come on manvi
Manvi was lead and shown by the her new sister.
Manvi;umm can I call u di
Jeevika(almost had tears in her eyes):of...of course
N they hugged.
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It had been a week now and manvi had got really attached to her new family...he mama,papa and of course her di
She now realized how it felt to get attention frm ur loved ones it made her cry sometimes that her real parents were never like that...she was very excited to day becuz tomorrow it was her first day at college with her di n plus she get to meet her soon to be jiju yes jeevika was in love n her parents had no problem with it...manvi addord her new parents the people that allow there childern to live there lives they want no boundaries no rules no omg wat will the people think...n that was the part she loved.
But it would take time for manvi to change for starters she was more comfortable in shalwar suit n her di had told her it totlaly cool soo she didnt think much about it...but lil did she know that soon she would be thinkin aboit it.
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Precap:
Enter vadera boyz...virman meet.
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Ok a lil about the vaderas and choperas.
They have been family friends for like forever...n there friwndship was then passed on to there childern...virat and virika love each other they have always been together...n now virika had fallen in love n would get married after there graduation. ...the age didnt really matter becuz the vadersa didnt mind to let jeevika do wat she wants in life even after the wedding.
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Feeew...finally done...I hope u liked it...n by the way there was just fast forward for this chap no more fast forwards...I promise...plz do like n comment.
Nia&krystal

Edited by nia3krystal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update yaar...
Loved it..
Pleassee continue soon and thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
wow this is an exciting turn ..manvi finally is living the life she wanted she is getting love attention and everything really happy seeing all this and also happy that she said the whole truth to jeevika ...
excited for virman's meeting update soon and thanx alott for the pm 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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totally brilliant absolutely loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update dear
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thanx 4 the PM
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
waiting for next update virman meeting
plz pm me

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