Arshi SS ~ For Your Sake #3 ~ Chapter 7 (Last) - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago
I was a silent reader till now but not anymore becoz I know that our comments matter a lot to you writers as my son is a writer too n he is writing a novel.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. just wow..

i liked those last few lines..

i hope arnav wnt let her go now..
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Posted: 12 years ago
you are an awesome writer Krani
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mishachwdhury

you are an awesome writer Krani



hey writer of this story is not krani.its anonymous...
but yeah both of them r equally good writers
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Posted: 12 years ago
so anonyji when is next update..
no no no i m not stalking,abhi sunday ko hi toh update kiya tha .pata hai,,,

just asking ki kab,thoda idea mil jata toh..as u said u will update it first..😆😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
When will you update this one?

I know its too early to ask for an update...but I just cant wait..
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Originally posted by: mishachwdhury

you are an awesome writer Krani

Sorry...Anonymous ji,you are an awesome writer too...and I actually posted that message on the wrong post 😛 Sorry once again
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Posted: 12 years ago
how amazingly you have described Khushi's dilemma. How beautifully you have penned down her inner thoughts like ..some one can be inside her mind and hear everything she was thinking, feeling.
you paint such lovely pictures with your words that it feels like you can really touch them, feel them.

how right they both are in their own way and still wrong.
I am hoping this will bear some positive result for him. His intentions are good...but the scars are so deep. I hope it will not make her feel more incomplete.

She was a simple girl with simple dreams. Never was she a go getter. And one single time she broke her boundaries and grabbed the hand of the boy her heart had fallen for, she ended up messing everything.

I hope this will not become her permanent regret...he has no idea of her line of thoughts...not completely and she does not have clue of his thoughts completely either...

finger's crossed...this is only bring more love and...may be initial rift ...and regrets will open up the channel of communication they so lack in this relation...
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Posted: 12 years ago
You have crafted this story beautifully anonymous. Your strong point or should i say your forte is the detailing you do in any situation you describe. I love how you are bringing a step by step closure to khushi's insecurities and problems.

Update soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
when r u updatinggg
plzzz bta dooo i can't w8 to read...

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