Arshi SS ~ For Your Sake #3 ~ Chapter 7 (Last)

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Lovelyangelpari

@Lovelyangelpari

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#361

God..khushi bhi na...She is madly in love with arnav,yet ready to sacrifice her love for his sake. But she had to understand that for him,there is no happiness without her. He can't move on in life even after beleiving she ditched him for his status. Now as every secrets is out how can he find love and happiness in anyone else. And what is she thinking, she will leave him again after sharing such intimacy. If she does so it will be a great mistake. A biggerone than the last time. Well, i know arnav never allow that to happen.

As you are going to update FYS next so that you can give it a proper closure, i think there will be no more twists in the storyline. Hope khushi getover her inferiority complex and start to accept her share of happiness.She deservs it...Now waiting for next part.😊

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Its beautiful especially consumation part, many writers write love making scenes with mature content u write it beautifully without any mature contents and all

Khushi, what i said she felt like burden on him, but give it chance to happiness i know its difficult to accept live your life one weakness ofcourse its big for your don't make it like this fight with it, face it and live your life

in this world there are many people with some disability but they lived with honour and respect much more than normal human being

Arnav ofcourse he wants her back but its going to difficult with his stubborn lady

you write both thoughts and views amazingly

Live your life with all respect, with all happiness no matter what weakness you had, what hurlde you face fight with it

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InkyCupid

@InkyCupid

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Loved, loved, LOVED the update! It was perfect right from the beginning towards the end.

The beginning scene was slightly emotional what with Keshavs innocent excitement at getting a lift in the apartment complex he lived it.. though I guess Khushi had her own pride to consider before accepting Arnavs help... Khushi really has caught herself in a mess, hasn't she?

A marriage proposal was something I wasn't expecting, but its a welcome twist..but really has a low self esteem doesn't she? Poor Arnav he is trying to get through but she is caught up in her own pain while misguidedly trying to protect him. Though he situation is a very complicated paradox what with her internal tug of war and her confused heart... I was laughing when I read that she suggested being just friends with him but it did break the tension in this thoroughly tragically toned update.

Arnavs finally epiphany was just icing on the cake.. it was nice that he could see through her pain and all the bagagges she carried around just like him.. and most of all her hatred towards her own body.. Its cute how in their teenage years a simple peck on the cheek made them happy.. but nothings holding them back now.

Their love making came as another pleasant shock for me, but it was the completely right fit for this chapter... it was shortly though beautifully described and it excited me to read about their differential opinions about what it mean for the next level in their relation.Arnav thinks its Khushi's submission, whereas she plans to escape as soon as possible.

Anyway, I read that you were continuing this story first and I doubt I can say that its disappointed. I love this story!!

UPDATE SOON:)

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Aishaqaiser

@Aishaqaiser

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Amazing update as evr!!!!!loved their monologue, both of their notion makes sense.cn relate 2 Khushi though! Thks 2 upcoming infertility treatment, prospects r getting better 4 females out dere facing similar situations! Bcz evry guy s nt arnav 😛 😉 refreshing to read fictions closer to real life 👏 moreover liked d fact dat physical appearance hs somewhat taken a backseat here n inner soul s appreciated,respected n loved 👏

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CrazyArshiFan

@CrazyArshiFan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

Just WOW !!!!!

Please,please don't separate them.Make Khushi see how right this is.

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jiji

@lakshyaNkt

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#366

i loved their POV. thank you!

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hiralhk

@hiralhk

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

just superb dear...

awesome updates...i love it..

thanks..

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#368

I always want to hug you when you make such logical and intelligent moves in your story 🤗
He coerced her, she was stubborn. Ofcourse, he wont sweet talk her to try and make her see that how happy they 'd be. This, making love to her, to worship her body to let this thing get planted her mind that she isnt incomplete, that she is doing more harm in separating them was the most sensible decision on Arnav s part.

I love that man! He is so so honest with himself with regards to his love for Khushi.
And as for Khushi, all the thought processes that she went through made her more understandable to us. Not that I wasnt earlier. Insecurity, not giving weight to self worth is a strong thing. And here she knows how tough Arnav s life has been. She'd do anything what she sees fit to make his 'dreams' come true.