KriYansh Drabbles|Unforeseen|Update-26/8- Ch4 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Thoughts?
A/N- Sorry. I was unable to update yesterday. My IP had got blocked.
I don't know why! 😡

Anyways, like and review!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Ooo
kria complain about rey
poor boy
Mama se daat sunni padi
but galti bhi usiki thi
kria kopareshan nhi karna chahiye tha usse
Nice update
Edited by kriapatel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Oh Teri!!!
Rey - Archana Miss ka fav Student N uski complain lagi..Tch!! Tch!!..So sad ...
Woh complain bhi Kria - The new student N Rey's enemy ne lagi , this is toh aur bhi not good 😆...

Now Rey has someone to actually compete with 😉...

The story is going interesting 😃...
N i'm loving it ❤️...

Will be waiting for the next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
nice part. . .
Yeh 3 parts i've read kisha version n 4th part is kept 4 kr n kr only. .
Do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
kria complain about him to her favourite teacher...
and rey is spell wound how will he say sorry to her...
it get interest to read more... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Chapter Four

Sorry- and to her? Had he heard it right? May be not. He asked ma'am for confirming what she said. "What ma'am?" "I said, say sorry to her!" Ma'am said, her voice rising. "But ma'am-" Rey tried to say, but was cut off by ma'am's sharp voice. "No buts, Reyansh. Apologise fast. Only 8 minutes are left for the period to get over," she spoke as she peeped in her watch.

Now it was Kria's turn to have fun. She smirked, victory evident in her eyes. "Fast Reyansh!" ma'am spoke in a hasty tone. KD shuddered in his surprised self.

"Sorry," he finally said meekly. "Louder, Reyansh," ma'am said. "Sorry," he said little louder in a defeated and angry tone, his head down. "It's okay," Kria said, suppressing her laughter. Finally that day came when he had to apologise her.

"Hmm- now don't repeat this." Ma'am said gesturing Kria to go and sit in her place. Kria nodded slightly in affirmation and went and sat back in her place- behind the bench which was beside Rey's. Rey sat on the left, towards Kria's bench, and Kria sat on the right, towards Rey's.

As she came, he made a face and coughed falsely. Kria adjusted herself as she looked towards him fluttering her eye lashes in the response to his cough with a simper on her face. Rey looked at her back, having an aggressive expression on her face. The war had started.

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Edited by Kesha1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Wah!! Kriya ki entry ne kya kya kamal kar dikhaye hain...
Pehle sab k saamne Rey ki complain ki , without any dar...
N now 'Soory' bhi bulvaya as in 'Reyaansh Singhania - The Cool Dude' se sorry bulvaya 😲...
Kamal kar dita Kria ne 😆...
N then kinni masoom ban gai thi...

This was a Nice one 😃...
Waiting to know k ab Rey kare ga , u know as in revenge types 😉...
Ese toh voh chorne se raha Kria ko 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
wow. . Nice part. .
Kisha ff has already completed 9 parts na. . .
So can u update dat 5 parts of dis too asap. . .
Pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
the chapter was good... i wonder what go to happen further there
sure is some what go to be a war or fight between them... look forward
to read more... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
nyc story...
update soon...
thnx fr d pm..

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