KriYansh Drabbles|Unforeseen|Update-26/8- Ch4

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Hey guys!

I know- I'm not updating my previous works and starting new ones.

But this one is what I can manage right now.

Basically, this is a fiction for another couple, that is KiSha.

This is just it's KR version.

I'll update it quite soon.

So introducing...


KriYansh Drabble Series- Unforeseen

Edited by Kesha1234 - 12 years ago

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Index

Chapter One- Scroll down.

Chapter Two- Page 5

Chapter Three- Page 10

Chapter Four- Page 12

Edited by Kesha1234 - 12 years ago
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Chapter One

She stamped her foot in frustration as she heard his voice. "Move aside! I can't read," he shouted from his seat. "What the hell does he think of himself!" she muttered as she moved away giving him a clear view of the board. She tapped her feet waiting for him to complete copying the notes from the board which she had written on the board.

She was Kria Ghai- who had just joined the school 'Convent of Jesus and Mary'. It had been just 2 months since her shift in the city. She got admitted in June and had missed the studies of the April month, that was of that of FA I. She had got a lot to cover. And being the smartest student X B, Reyansh Singhania's number was giver to her for the completion of books. He had helped her then, but they soon started quarreling.

It all started when Kria had hit her leg to his when sitting behind him by mistake. Reyansh being the hot-tempered one hit her back. And ah! The Best Enemies Forever were created. Whenever Kria would get a single mark more than him, he would check her class assignment sheet twice and thrice, and would any how reduce her at least mark.

And when Kria got second rank, with Rey being first, the enmity sank further. There was insecurity in Rey's mind of someone taking his place. He would never let any one get better marks than him- never.

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Edited by Kesha1234 - 12 years ago
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Thoughts?
Please like and review or else think this as a pause of all my works!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ahem!! I did go through KiSha version , pehle But comment nai kiya cause mereko KR version mein parhna tha 😳...
N see now meri 'Un-Voiced Wish' qabool ho gai 😆 😎...

Alright!! So KR k bheech mein competition type wali story hai yeh...
This is toh obviously going to be interesting ...
I'm toh already loving it ❤️..

Ab plz humpe taras kha k update soon...
Mereko agar PM nai bhi mile ga toh chale ga 😉...
Buss update de dena 😛 😳...

But for now...
I'll be waiting for the update...
N thanks for the pm 😊
Edited by Roxxy47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res :-D
unres. . . .:-D
kesha maate. . .
Aapki jai ho,
ek aur story,when u have 'LOTS' of pending works. . . . .
Waise,yeh wali story bi mast hai. . .
Gosh. . . .Rey ki insecurity. . .kuch urmm. . .zada nahi hai,i mean seriously ek mark k liye,3 baar re-check. .🤣 . .
M loving dis concept. .
And part jaldi update krna. . .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was cute...

waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg ,this made me remind about my school days during 5th-6th grade
this same thing happens every time with me and my classmate
he used recheck my answer sheet when i scored more than him
now i miss as we are in different schools
anyway lovely concept on kr
do continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its superb
loved it
really amazing concept n please ek baar kria k rey se jyada marks le aao
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great and fabulous start well written... do continue soon and pm me...

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