Arshi SS : Complex Desires *Epi #1 Pg13* Updtd (07/09) Proposal

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Loved it
Awesome update
Thanx for the pm
Waiting for more
Continue soon
Thanx for the pm

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

finally u updated this

and finally i commented too

s garima a positive or a negative character

btw d start was amazinggg d way u introduced all d characters

m luvingg ittt

as always well-written

m waiting for d nxt part update sooonnn

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Superb start.
Interesting update.
Is grima a grey character?
Can't wait for the next update.

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Nice one... But looks like Garima is going to play a trick for her daughters future... How will ARSHI get together...?

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Uff Chote... u and ur Confusing Updates

Unless i understand so,e bit about it.. My comments ll be Like this Oly...

Nice Update..

Continue Soon Chote

Waiting for the next

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Loved the CS... Begining Part is damn Interesting...

Precap seems sad and interesting... Good Update👏

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sfghfj

@sfghfj

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

interesting start. waiting to read further

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sabz105

@sabz105

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Hi MT_loverboy,

Just read the first chapter of your new SS 'Complex Desires', I can only say it's a really interesting SS and I'm already hooked on the story!!!

I really liked reading the first chapter, you gave us a good update of the story and the characters!!!

I felt sorry for NK; how he gets treated by Garima, but it's understandable as he is from Garima's late husband's previous relationship!!!

I really didn't like the look of the pre-cap!!!!

It looks like Garima and Payal will be upto no good!!! I know you mentioned there will be no negative characters in this SS, but due do human nature these characters will react accordingly!!!!

It seems like because of Khushi's parents death in the accident, Garima will present Payal in front of the Raizada family as Khushi!!!! But will Payal be able to act and behave like the real Khushi???

It also looks like Khushi and NK will become much closer as I not only see a good brother in NK but a good friend who will try and help Khushi during the difficult time when she's lost her parents!!!!

I wonder if Arnav comes across Khushi in NK's garage and eventually falls in love with her????

Please MT_loverboy try and update next chapter soon, waiting eagerly to know what's going to happen next after Khushi's parents accident!!!!

Thanks for a good read as usual!!!

Keep up the great work you're doing and looking forward to next chapter!!!

Take care

P.S

When will you be updating the epilogue of 'When life turns a bad game'????

Thanks again MT_loverboy

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Nice update
khushi and payal exchanged? Means?
update soon

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Really interesting so they are asking khushi in hand and her parents pass away. So NK is out. Hmm interesting. Excited for the next update. Thks for the pm.