Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 10) - Page 5

congo shongo jiii
thread 10...WOW.
Waiting for the update

Congrats on the new thread.

congrats on thread no 10 :)

Congrats on the new thread.

woohooo new thread for this
just as i suspected

Congrats on the new thread

Fabulous update ... thoroughly enjoyed reading it 😊 Thanks for the mail

OMG!!! Poor Arnav is still haunted with that nightmare. The portion relating to how he was troubled by some incident many a nights & couldn't get over it no matter what was excellently framed

"He gave an angry glare to the AC of the room , which was humming at its usual 16 degrees but was of no help "👍🏼

Arnav losing hope of having a peaceful sleep anymore & so he planning to keep his mind pre-occupied with work; & shocked to find his little angel awake & some issue troubling her; she breaking her reluctance of opening the news of the surgery to Sumer followed by the little convo between the two & she telling him that she wouldn't forgive Karan & him if something happens to bade papa increasing his worry all the more brought out the trouble Arnav was encircled in

Arnav perplexed whether his decision was right or not regarding carrying out his dad's surgery earlier than needed, Sumer's fear for surgery fearing him more, then he reminiscing how his dad & Khushi's love for each other was immeasurable & finally he heaving a sigh of relief that Buaji will somehow convince her brother was well laid down

Arnav engrossed in the beauty of his sleeping beauty & thinking that she's an innocent & fragile hearted person who was oblivious to the harsh world outside & his heart soothing at the thought of she relying on him these days but to be suddenly interrupted by Rishabh's thoughts while the next second Arnav's over possessiveness on Khushi taking over his mind, his thoughts of to never ever let go of her even if she wanted to, as she belonged to him, ONLY HIM flashing as the predominant factor & he thinking that soon something has to be done at any cost to make her stay with him forever threw light on the extreme possessiveness he has for her branding her as his own & also wanting to own her smile, her talk, etc even though he hasn't completely realized his love for her

Buddy, Arnav's soliloquy about how his happiness laid in her & he determined to draw out plans to make her stay by using her emotional weakness was astoundingly penned down 👏 It's understandable that Arnav suffered all these years devoid of love. But still his over possessiveness is a bit scary 😲 since he was thinking that once before he let her go but not anymore even though if she wishes to go in the future ... hope he doesn't hurt this poor soul in the process

I t was nice to read, a father elated at the thought of his son taking up the responsibilities of the house & involving himself even in the tinniest matters relating to the house . Arnav's heart in peace after learning from Buaji that she had conveyed the news regarding the surgery to Summer & he didn't fuss too much about it but on returning home his dad's unwillingness leading to an argument with Arnav, Khushi, Buaji & Sumer creating rage, fear & panic within Arnav & he sternly saying that the operation had to happen by all means was a well structured scene

Arnav feeling good on being pacified by Khushi for the first time & he becoming slightly disturbed & emotional on hearing her say that she was there with him making him seek her reassurance on her words & his heart eased on hearing her say 'ALWAYS' was a brilliant ending

Eagerly looking forward for the next chappie ... WAITING

Congratulations for the new thread !! :D

Your work is just plainly beautiful... When I sit down to write my thoughts on your work, I end up wordless all the time... That's the effect and I am very honest here... I feel so less deserving to write my thoughts out here and feel with whatever I write I would not do complete justice to put in words how much I value your work... You have me captivated and the 5 or 10 mins I spend reading your update, my asli world stops existing for me...

I can't skip talking about your talent and come directly to talk about the update... I won't stop saying this in every comment of mine until I come across some other author who has your style...Your work n your style of writing is so unique and I treasure it...

That was a perfectly written update... Arnav is now on a mission and I am happy about it... It is not that he dint try to stay away from her, but now this guy is not going to let her go at all.. The words she told might not have been what he took it in the sense she meant it to be... It has hit him at right place and he has no reason to stop doing things to keep her with him...

She too has become dependent on him and it is only a matter of time that she realizes what she wants... Rishab is going to try his ways too and I can see a lot of promising stuff on our way... I so love the senior Raizada... He is a sweet heart and a true father in all the sense...

I wanted to be on the first page of this thread sigh anyways A Hearty Congratulations! Anamika Ji.

Congratzz on the new thread!!