||~Something About You~||#13 *COMPLETED*21/08/DT NOTE: PG 32 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Loved d os
pls give us more one shots
for each ritual
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
OMG I FREAKIN LOVE THIS!!!
awesome update yaar! This was the best present on Baruns bday seriously!
The OS was written beautifully! 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Updated comment on page 1😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am excited to read :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Mind Blowing! Beautiful! Perfect! Superb! Brilliant! Fantastic! Amazing! Incredible! Terrific! Tremendous! Passionate! Pure! Lovely! Well done! Creative! Genius! Okay I can't think of any more words rights now but all these words and more describe this story. I know you probably don't recognize me and that because I have been I silent reader if this FF for so long and I have recently began commenting on updates! Let me just start off by saying that you are an amazing writer! You truly have talent and weave a story well. This story captured my heart so eagerly that whenever there wasn't a precap I couldn't manage with the wait. The story of Arnav and Khushi's journey towards love is absolutely brilliant and full of soul and emotions. This OS summed up everything that embodies this FF! The bickering and the joking around and the passion and the compassion and the reluctance and the love. Everything was present!
Of course we see a beautiful baby born into the world, Khushi and Arnav's niece. The copy of Khushi shows how this child will also cement herself in everyone's hearts like Khushi had.
The argument over their names for their niece after they get married is so Arnav and Khushi. Due to their pride and ego they cannot let go of what they believe in. Arnav wants to be known as Mama ad Khushi as Fui. But what to do with this couple, Arnav is still addicted to the drug named Khushi hence he comes out saying the sweetest things ever and pacified his Red. And Khushi is no less. She makes sure that she always holds a special place in Arnav's heart as his only Red. The fact that Arnav only holds the baby with Khushi in his arms shows the strength of their bond and their dependence and support toward each other!
Arnav once again designs Khushi's dress but keeps in mind his blunder for last time. As much as he would love seeing Khushi all exposed he doesn't want other to see her that way. He also chooses a Coe that he loves seeing her in besides red. Khushi true to her sweet nature decides to surprise her love on his birthday. Arnav then opens up with her which shows the progression of their relationship. Arnav is mor open with her now than he was before and he is willing to share his emotions. They make their own little vows together while sitting in each others arms basked in their love. And when Arnav makes Khushi promise to sleep nude after being married, well a I could do I blush and laugh because that sounds a lot like Arnav! I love how as the story progressed you never lost the true essence of every character. Though they evolved they never changed completely into a different person, but rather matured. The Jerry on top of the update is that the cake said "Happy Birthday Fufaji". That cracked me up! So lost I each other they forgot about the cake which stands as a reminder that no matter how much these two change they are always the same!!
Overall the OS and the FF were simply unbelievable. I'm at Anglos of words on how to aptly describe the story and you're writing! It was perfection and I hope to see more writing by you in the future!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The update was amazing I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really loved it sooo much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
fantastic, I am in awe with your writings 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
OMG , I cannot express my excitement when I saw ur new OS. I missed ur writing, the beautiful narration of the intensity of love Arnav and Khushi share .
Lovely OS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Wow nice loved it
happy birthday bs
thankx 4 pm :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
wow fari love u soo much...awesome chapter only arhi wow simply amazing...loved it...thanks for pm

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