||~Something About You~||#13 *COMPLETED*21/08/DT NOTE: PG 32

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Something About You is a classic story, farah...for all times to come...

Happy IPK Holi to you !

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

has the date been fixed farah -

the auspicious day/date when my Red and her LG would finally be united in the bonds of holy matrimony

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BSDsarun

@BSDsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

read ur all ff...
just love it so much...
u wrote it so beautifully nd maturelly...
just awesome...
hope in fature u will write ffs soon

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Red is not just a colour definitely

SAY is not just another love story

Farah darling just ask Priya & me

& am sure all the readers will agree

Each word forever in their memories

Cause SAY was a fiction so legendary

Characters we identified with immediately

Especially that of your Arnav & his Khushi

A love that bound them so beautifully

With so much passion and intensity

With the love and support of the family

Anger, fear, pride and also with loyalty

Emotions portrayed so very magically

Each person suited their role perfectly

Rohan the protective brother especially

Disapproving of her and Arnav initially

For his sister's future wanting security

Marriage & more for he wanted obviously

On these issues their thoughts contrary

To the couple causing grief eventually

An unexpected twist & betrayal unfortunately

Leading to darkness and danger suddenly

Overcoming every obstacle thankfully

Realising what was important timely

Happiness they find together finally

A 'home' a promise for an eternity...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Red is not just a colour definitely
SAY is not just another love story

Farah darling just ask Priya & me

& am sure all the readers will agree

Each word forever in their memories

Cause SAY was a fiction so legendary

Characters we identified with immediately

Especially that of your Arnav & his Khushi

A love that bound them so beautifully

With so much passion and intensity

With the love and support of the family

Anger, fear, pride and also with loyalty

Emotions portrayed so very magically

Each person suited their role perfectly

Rohan the protective brother especially

Disapproving of her Arnav apparently

For his sister's future wanting security

Marriage & more for he wanted obviously

On these issues their thoughts contrary

To the couple causing grief eventually

An unexpected twist & betrayal unfortunately

Leading to darkness and danger suddenly

Overcoming every obstacle thankfully

Realising what was important timely

Happiness they find together finally

A 'home' a promise for an eternity...

wah wah wah excellent vandana

SAY is definitely not just another love story and Red is just not a colour anymore for us

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

@ vandana.sagar Appi... WOW... Wonderful... Nd every single word is true... Just perfect... Now I NEED to read SAY again...

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Skiran

@Skiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Red is not just a colour definitely
SAY is not just another love story

Farah darling just ask Priya & me
& am sure all the readers will agree

Each word forever in their memories
Cause SAY was a fiction so legendary

Characters we identified with immediately
Especially that of your Arnav & his Khushi

A love that bound them so beautifully
With so much passion and intensity

With the love and support of the family
Anger, fear, pride and also with loyalty

Emotions portrayed so very magically
Each person suited their role perfectly

Rohan the protective brother especially
Disapproving of her Arnav apparently

For his sister's future wanting security
Marriage & more for he wanted obviously

On these issues their thoughts contrary
To the couple causing grief eventually

An unexpected twist & betrayal unfortunately
Leading to darkness and danger suddenly

Overcoming every obstacle thankfully
Realising what was important timely

Happiness they find together finally
A 'home' a promise for an eternity...

Agree with you Vandana totally 👏 Its amazing how you put the entire story in few words beautifully❤️

Miss Arnav and his Red..Hope we get a OneShot for this story

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: Skiran

Agree with you Vandana totally 👏 Its amazing how you put the entire story in few words beautifully❤️

Miss Arnav and his Red..Hope we get a OneShot for this story

even I want to have a glimpse of what's happeneing in LG and his Red's life

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: Skiran

Agree with you Vandana totally 👏 Its amazing how you put the entire story in few words beautifully❤️

Miss Arnav and his Red..Hope we get a OneShot for this story

Inshallah ...

They are such excellent characters...

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#330

Vandana, your poem defined SAY so rhythmically *claps*

SAY is (I won't use 'was') a beautiful story written by an equally beautiful person...No wait. Between SAY and Fari, Fari is more beautiful <3

Edited by lazyleaves - 11 years ago