Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10

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ash97

@ash97

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#321

I just love it❤️
The way u portrayed Manvi's emotion n feeling i can actually fits in her shoes.
Gr8 update keep up the good job👍🏼

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Oh my god
freaking amazing update
glad manvis recovering
sooo happy that virat forcefully took manvu to their room
cuz thats wat made her open up
eeekkksss so happy
cnt wait for next part
update soon 😉
wud lub to read ur blog stories too
eagerly waiting for the link

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Awesome update..!! ❤️❤️ Loved it.. Finally Manvi opened up to Virat.. She didn't need his sympathy or pity.. All she needs is an assurance that everything is fine and they still need her.. She wants the assurance that if she needs him, he will be right there.. Loved Virat's outburst.. Beautiful portrayal of emotions 👏👏.. Now those monsters are again looking for Manvi.. Hope this time Virat will be able to protect her and his family.. Will be waiting for the next.. Take care 😊

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Was waiting to read this one.

Love to see such a concerned Virat, he gave her the time she needed but I guess we all have a breaking point. It wasn't going to be long when he broke apart and wanted her to let him in.

I could only guess what he was going through listening to her, if seeing her in that state in the hospital could make him break down hearing exactly what she went through from her own mouth would literally kill him.

So I guess the whole danger with manvi is not over and now this is giving me a whole Addicted Vibe with the bad guys coming after Manvi at least Virat is smart enough to understand that manvi is still in danger.

This is going to be another nail biter for sure.

PS:You really have a way with writing about kids, and I'd love to read anything you write be it Virman or any Tom Dick or harry.

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

amazing update again anu ...even though Diya 's bonding with her mom makes us smile no one can forget the pain of manvi and also virat's now seeing manvi go thru all this...he is letting her get used to all this and giving time to open up infront of him but she is feeling like she has stopped their life ..she is still disturbed...
and their feeling just soo amazingly put up by you 👏
waiting for the next one update soon 😃

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#326

amazing update
loved the way virat took her back to his room
finally she has revealed the truth to virat
wonder how is virat going to react
please continue soon