TR DARK FF: Trapped(ch3 updt pg 18)

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ketki2000

@ketki2000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

it was amazing
expecting a very intense story
update soon
nd pm me

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riachandnani

@riachandnani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Amazing concept!!! Prologue was superb!!!! Hawww rey told dat guy to KILL swayam!!!??? Loved d Cs ! Update soon n thnx fr d pm... :)

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Dear u r brilliant hw cm ol dese in ur mind yr...? CS nd prolouge kya batau speechless sharon nd taani besttiess.. Nd nd main shocked i m for Rey as n terrorist... I hv nvr thought dis i mn nvr imagined dis character for rey.. Nd taani helping swayam rey askd to kill swayam jz for dt taani ws wid if he cm to noe abt taani's fake lub nd she ws helping swayam...o god... Abi se m starting making prediction... Updte soon yr...

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-Sapna-

@-Sapna-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Wow interesting idea, I really liked the prologue! 😃

I like how T and Shar thought it was a prank at first! And how they thought the guy in the car was RS! If he really is a big person obviously he has people to do the grunt work like following someone around! 😆I wonder how Taarey first meeting is going to be?

And I wonder why they call their boss skinny? Unless she's really skinny which makes sense.

Edited by -Sapna- - 12 years ago

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

rey terrorist and swayam fbi agent and sharon and tanni fashion designers... (i'm a designer tooo) ahaaan... sounds super interesting... am in for this ride... yay! waise bhi d3 is getting shitty... i'm hating it...

yay... pls continue soonish and ty for the pm !