TR DARK FF: Trapped(ch3 updt pg 18)

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kriti094

@kriti094

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Amazing concept
plz continue soon

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Fatima Faiq

@-Fam_TaaReY-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Awesome concept and prologue 👏 👏

Amazing 👏 👏

Update soon and don't say it as your last FF 😡

Will be waiting for your PM 😉

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aparajita

@aparabosecarmel

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

i m very sorry for being late

this is a different concept loved it
plz post asap

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raveena

@raveena1

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

thank u so much guys for accepting this FF...i m so happy that u liked the idea.

PRASSI dear sorry for rey's CS...but trust me u'll like his character when story will move forward.

now take a intresting promo and leave ur lovely comments.

PROMO 1

"T, baby u r dead...how can u feel anything for a terrorist,for a monster.

no u can't do this to urself..u have to control ur feelings to teach a lesson to that monster."taani closes the file after taking a big desicion of her life and moves towards the room where sharon is sleeping.

sorry for nt updating. will try to update 1st chapter soon.

love

ravee

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Prasanna

@PRASSI

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Raveee!!!!😡😡😡

I told u before only that no more promos from now!!!

But what is this!!!

Again promo not an update!!!

I'm angry!!!

But still promo is interesting!!!

Seems like Taani would have seen him or else would have read about him thats why she is falling for him!!!

Hayee itni jaldi Rey ko pasand karne lag gai!!!

Chalo aage pata chalega only if this Ravee madam stops giving promos n will start giving updates!!!

Now I dont know anything else I want update not any promo!!!

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shikha_taarey

@shikha_taarey

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Aise promo dede kar na tadpao ravee!!!
Taani taking a decision!!
N uske baat se aisa lag raha hai as if she had some feelings for rey bt now is suppressing it!!😕
Pls ravee jaldi se first part update karo!!!
Cant wait!!! Promo kuch jyaada hi exciting tha!!! 😃