The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#921

arnav had planned to take khushi with him...i think its better for all of them as prnab's attraction seems to be increasing day by day...so if khushi is away frm him its good...

this was a awesome part...khushi is slowly falling for arnab...but unable to understand the feeling she has with him...

loved it...

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orchids8888

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Posted: 11 years ago

#922

Dear thanks for the pm.😃

I loved this improvement in Arnav and Khushi's relation.👏 For the first time Arnav kissed Khushi.☺️ I feel this is the beginning of deep love between Arnav and Khushi.❤️

Thanks dear for informing about Arshi's past.

I hope Arnav takes Khushi with him.

Please dear update.

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BubblySanaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#923

That was an amazing part...i just LOVED it.

this is the first time so far in this story that Arnav has listened to his heart.

superb

and i loved Khushi's reaction.

this reminds me of the first kiss near the pool (in the show i meant)

And Pranab...he is certainly falling for Khushi.

And as expected Khushi is all occupied with Arnav's thoughts.

I just hope Pranab's feelings will not create any problems between Khushi and Arnav.

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BlueAngel20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Another superb update Jenny di

I thought Pranab was unmarried here and will get married after he turns 15-16 years old but he is already married to a girl of 6 years.

Pranab told Khushi that he is going to fly kite in the terrace and asked will she accompany him?? but Khushi absent mindedly told no. Pranab was hurt

Arnab was married to Khushi's sister but she died due to chicken pox. Poor child and then 10 years old Khushi was married to 23 years old Arnab " HOW RUDE..!!! "

Khushi made embroidery in handkerchief for Arnab and wrote " A " as his name starts with A.

Khushi felt asleep while waiting for him and Arnab thought that his mum or thammi has send her here.

Arnab was happy when Khushi gifted him the handkerchief and I " LOVED " the special moments between Arnab and Khushi

Arnav kissed Khushi awiiieee

Khushi felt she is anaemic. She is such a child. My baby

and last Jenny di the the hint about Pranab you gave is making my heart stop a beat.

Jenny di update soon am eagerly waiting 😊

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ashnitaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#925

I really loved arnab & khushi's cute romantic moment..
pranab's attraction towards khushi is natural..
update soon

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vinu.sr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#926

Thank God the Rabba Vey happened at the end of the story otherwise I would have been left with this huge lump in my throat that refused to go after reading about Khushi's sister's death...and how it was considered a blessing those days to die with those red and white bangles adorning a girl's wrists. As expected Pranab is married too!

The story revolves around Arnab and Khushi but you have very easily established all the other characters too so effectively and that is the sign of good storytelling!!!

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Niranjana R

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Posted: 11 years ago

#927

wow.. arnab and pranab is in love with her .. how sweeet

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dima_a

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Posted: 11 years ago

#928

awesome update... .first time Arnav heart rule his mind ...first time Khushi felt woman emotion around the her man ...the story time give us the magic ...and the part about khushi dead sister...that arnav first pride...the pride dead very young so he can't remember her just like the children in her 10 years old..so practical she not existing in arnav mind...and loved the way arnav take khushi present for him....

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shona-li

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Posted: 11 years ago

#929

The thread of innocence you've woven and maintained through all the chapters is beautiful. Even Arnav, who is touted as the 'experienced' of the three of them is innocent in the way he tries to find a means of dealing with his feelings and principles in this situation. All if them are trying to find their way to deal with their feelings which is bittersweet to see.

I'm glad to see that Arnab is more protective than defensive around Khushi now. The consideration they show to each other is endearing. ".. it's the best I've ever had." Oh Arnab, how you've made Khushi's day! That's a better response than she's been expecting! And the decision to peck her cheeks instead was very cute. And Khushi's dhak-dhak! And..and..and..

I just loved everything! But Pranab tho..the poor baby is going to experience his first heartache. In my head, I see NK as our Pranab - the smittened, trusted friend of Khushi Kumari Gupta! I'll be keeping a lookout for your update!

Edited by shona-li - 11 years ago