The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS

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@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#581

finally the update..

amazing update jenny...👏👏

glad dat arnav decide to wait for her little bride to b grown up to take der relationship to next level..

happy 2 see dat da relation between arshi gradully improving...hope arshi fell in love soon...

oh no.. kahani me twist.. pranab was attracted to khushi nd falling for her..i hope dis nt leads to any complications in already complicated relation of arshi..nd plzz dnt let arnav to think that pranab was way better dan him for khushi...finger crossed..

love every bit of da update..beautifully potrayed...loved it

egarly waiting 4 da nxt..

continue soon😊

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cheriebinny

@cheriebinny

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#582

Perhaps when arnav will notice pranav's feelings for khushi then he will consider his own feelings

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#583

You have described Arnab's emotions and his point of view regarding his young child like wife very very wonderfully ... he the mature adult would have to hold his horses and wait for his bride to grow up... he would wait for and it would be wonderfully to fall in love with her ...he is very carefull in answering her cuz whatever he says to her would affect her young mind a lot ... She mends her ways according to his likes ...
Pranab ,... they ate both same age and spent a lot of time with each other so it's very natural for him to feel attracted toward his bahudi ... but I just hope it don't create any problem between the couple ...
Ohhh boy growing up is indeed very hard

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

nice one.. glad that Arnav is letting Khushi to grow on her own..

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#585

Arhi relationship growth was amazing. He patiently explained to her about how she hasn't mature enough for babies.
Taking her to the library and showing her the gramophone.
I'm Glad he realised that his every word meant something to her.
He is slowly accepting her.

Okay pranab and khushi's closeness. Whenever their moments come, I feel that it should have been Arnav. He is getting a crush on her and I don't want to see Arnav sacrificing.

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#586

that's perfect...
arnab khushi moments were just beautifully written...
lovd the way their relation ix progressing...
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parnab falling 4 khushi...the story has become more interesting...
plxxx continue soon...
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thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#587

The innocence you bring about in this delicate love story is amazing.

Every little action of Khushi and how Arnab reacts to them are beautifully portrayed !!

Purab and Khushi are growing up together and this adolescence curiousty is always a very tricky time...looking forward to see how this topic is now dealt with.

Ps : I know not the 1920's😆 but u get the essence of the pic !!😳

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#588

arnie has handled very well.nice yaar

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chenis

@chenis

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#589

Nice one

Pranab is falling for khushi. Hope there would be no triangular love story.

Loved it when arnav said that he would wait for the child to grow up to a women.

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#590

I don't know Jenny, while I was reading this update my heart was filled with concerns. Arnab understood the sweet little girl and wanted to wait for her to grow up. He is really a gentleman.

But by the end of this chapter, I was saying Oh No, Oh No, continuously. I hope Pranab does not cause any problems between Arnab and Khushi. Arnab should not feel he is too old for Khushi or Khushi should not think Pranab is of her age and Arnab is too old for her. I hope nothing of this sort happens.

Very well written... Enjoyed reading Arnab and Khushi's interaction... so much warmth and innocence...

I am glad you will be able to update frequently now. Can we wish for 2 chapters in a week ? Continue soon.

Edited by pinkly - 12 years ago