The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS - Page 36

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

123.9k

Users

328

Likes

3.5k

Frequent Posters

crazydream thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Started reading this ff.
Liked the concept very much.
It's awesome.

Will comment after reading the 4 parts.
opsyellow thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
I never thought that Arnab going to that place was wrong. I want to believe that they have those places for men like Arnab who have need but sad thing is that men like Arnab dad also go there. I very happy that Arnab didn't go through with that girl because that will be so wrong for person like Arnab.
Arnab is 26 and have a wife whom he cant get any pleasure from and he is willing to wait but sometimes you cant control
desire and you can blame Arnab behaving like a human.
Sad thing is you cant blame the society either because the time was like that! Because now we call it child marriage is illegal and those people pedophiles does change anything because that time they did was normal.
I think my mom got married when she was 16 or 17 and my grandma got married when she was only 12! The time differents was from 1920 to 1960 0r 70 I guess but there was no big difference. Changes came very slowly with the society and people was just following it.
Wonderful story.
tanvia thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
wow...it was great..
loved..
so thoroughly written..
:)
-HEAVEN- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IPK007


Thanks dear for taking an interest in TBWD and for your long , detailed and heartfelt comment. I understand your feelings about the current track in the story :) Thanks for being so emotionally invested in this story. The scene where he goes to the tawaif house to indulge in his most basic desires was disturbing no doubt but very much a reality of those days. Those were the days when there was no dating, open relationships with people of the opp sex were frowned upon and men like Arnab who were married to 13-14 year olds had three choices..First.. to just force their wives to grow up..by having intercourse with them(commonest scenario...almost all of our great grandmoms were probabaly married off at this age and had kids soon after). Second, wait for their wives to grow up but succumb to their desires by visiting these places (second commonest scenario...which would have been the case in this story too, if Arnab hadn't discoved the age of the person he was about to have sex with)... Or the third scenario, which my idealistic mind (and yours) wishes had happened all the time...Arnab curbing his desires and waiting for his wife to grow up a little..
[DIV]In this story...Arnab will fall somewherein the category between 2. and 3...because like I had always maintained that he wasn't a typical young man of his times. But he wasn't perfect either..:) He succumbed to temptation but wasn't at peace with his decision.. and when he was saved just in time..(from being unfaithful to Khushi), he was relieved. This relief is what makes him different from his contemporaries..:)
Hope this helped...:)


thanks a lot for ur reply😊

ab mein kya bolu!!!😳

i know this was common back then. i even read a novel whr a 25 year old man marries a 10 year old girl...its really hard to digest😕 n about the tawaif part...being a bengali book read i m quite familier wid these things. but they never cease to amaze me. i hav read books whr there r men of all those 3 catagories. first 2 catagories alys terrify me n abt the last one they r far better than many men of these days n those days😕

plzzz dont thank u me...ek bada wala THANK YOU...for u 😳
u replied me...now m mast😃

my own grandmother got married at 15...my grandfather was 28! my dad was born whn she was 18.
lol...my granny teases me that nobody ll marry me as i hav crossed the age!! who wants to marry a buddhi!!😳
06Pallavi_Arshi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
loved it!
isnt arnab,supposed to Be Arnav?
404703 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
OMGGG...the last thing was soo hilarious...
wonderfullly written dear...each detail is just mind blowing...

thnks for the Pm...
flowers4u thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow absolutely brilliant ...loved it...keep it up
PhoenixTears thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant chapter Jenny. My heart goes out to Khushi, everyone is forcing her to be woman and little girl is trying her best to be one. She did her best for Arnav and then he comes to ask whats wrong with her, Khushi's answers were so innocent that no wonder Arnav laughed. You are doing a great job with this story Jenny, its a fantastic concept and all updates are simply superb, fabulous work 👏👏👏
710617 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
I rather have him indulge option 2 ... Albeit with an older women... That eases of the pressure on Khushi...she will always be a little too young for him till she is 20.. And then poor dear Arnav will be 33 and balding due to sexual frustration.
After 25 .. Any male or female should start indulging in sex whether they are married or not..my opinion.
kaulpriyanka thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting storyline. Pls update soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

26 days ago

The Unending Dream OS [Completed]

In Every Birth, Find Me The night air in Mathura was thick with monsoon rains. In her small room lit only by a flickering diya, Radhika drifted...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

27 days ago

Moh-Maya ~ MayRa OS [Completed]

Whispers of Maya The glass towers of Delhi glittered under the cold moonlight, but inside the corner office of Ruan Publications, darkness...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

2 months ago

Pyaar Ya Rebound? ~ Rumya SS [Completed]

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

4 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed} ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

5 months ago

Student of the Year: When Love Lost Its Way [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @JasmineRahul in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: The alternative version of the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".