Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

A_BA

Another really wonderful update ... Love the pace of the story and the details ... Lavanya is out and Khushi is making small inroads ... Pm nothing like a paced romance ... The new man ... A rival cricketer ? Shayam ... Lovely cliff hanger ... Lovely bit of writing ... Thans so much

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aayt

@aayt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

u r wonderful writer

I read this ff quite late all chaps together I loved it

new concept pretty much new from tycoon title but still ASR flavor is there

khushi is also good la's chap is ended here so coast is clear

I personally want more arshi moment then cricket I hope u don't mind because im not big fan of the game

but u r the writer so u n have full faith on ur writing skills keep it up

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Nice one 👏

So La is out and Khushi is seeping in his skin but slowly.

Good one a new jealous player...Shyam is entering the the league of Love.

Kjhushi hesitates ...hmmm...that is interesting to see how it will fold out.

Thnx for the PM

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Liya123

@Liya123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

Wonderful update! So Arnav put end to his relationship with Lavanya. Now can't wait for Arnav and kushis journey:-) :-)

Thanks for the pm

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navjot7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

awesome update
i think guy at end is shyam
i know u had not mention shyam name till now
but refering tos snake i remember only shyam hahha
thnx for pm

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1987Trisha

@1987Trisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

is he Shyam...

ohhh god plzzz..i don't want him in this story

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Everything seems to be good in the land of Arnav Singh Raizada!! His career and cricket form seems to have gotten in place... and so is his relationship status. I loved the way Arnav managed to break-up with Lavanya easily. It was mature of her to not create a scene and accept the lack of the bond they shared. Somethings are just not meant to be and its best to move on...

The most interesting fact remains, that Arnav thinks about Khushi through these past few days. He may discard that part at a corner of his mind, yet he surely has started getting affected by her. It was funny to see, how Khushi was trying to convince her boss out of putting her onto finding some juicy scoop on Arnav. Her work seems to be on the right track, although I wonder how she is going to be able to get close enough to Arnav for him to tell her his lives secrets...

But for me the most important part will remain, when she actually exposes him and breaks his trust. Even though that part is far away, my heart is already breaking for Arnav. The anger management class was interesting and I wonder what role is Dr Kumar going to play in this story, in the future. So finally Mumbai Indians are on a winning spree... and Arnav managed to hit 3 sixes... I am happy and I can totally celebrate the victory of my home city!!!

Its nice to see both of them chatting casually, the comfort of being around each other is enjoyable. Atleast the topic of Aman got them to have an easy conversation, that possibly did not got down with one particular man... Is it that scumbag Shyam Manohar Jha? I am glad that Khushi thinks of him as a snake too. I wonder what role he plays in Arnav's life and can't even see that poor chap laughing with someone!!

This is a celebratory dance for the Mumbai Indian's victory!!