Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

nice concept...hard to imagine a copy editor not knowing anything during IPL in India; but I guess K is unique!?

can't wait to read more..

-Sona

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Liya123

@Liya123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Unfortunately I cant imagine asr as an cricketer. Yet, I like the innovative idea. So kushi is a reporter...wow.

What is the secret about Arnav sister?

I like the first rava ve :-)

Hey update soon. Seems like u didn't update for long time

Keep up the good writing :-)

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Nakshatra

@amfashionista

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

jus found ur story

must say a nice start and hatke one tooo

loved it

need to read ur other stories

pls pm me future chapters

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

aha the epic fall scene

nazrein milein mil ke jhukein deewane phir ho gaye

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Dimz13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

It's like east meets west..and what better way than in and embrace...way to go...perhaps Kushi can bring ASR down a peg or two..very nicely. The beginning is good..I wonder if their journey together is going to be as sizzling...!

What with the sitter angle..why is he so sensitive about it..?

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

We have to be more adventurous with our stories...loved I i

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

It sounds so interesting...waiting to read more...

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

interesting story...just read 2 parts to day,loved it totally different...

arnav cricketer,and kushi is editor...nice start their careres are totally different...loved it kushis spirit she is full of life what to lead her life the way she wants too...

looking forward to the next chapter...

please add me to u r buddy list...

cheers...

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

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Nandz

@Nandz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Lovely chapter!!

I was eagerly waiting for the update of its story, as it is a totally different story with Arnav as a cricketer!

Absolutely killing!

N i love how you have kept this story as close to reality as possible!

So what a luck khushi! Straightaway fell in to arnav's arms! So fire has already been lit lets see when the sparks start flying!

N what a lame question khushi asked? I mean seriously? How did he feel after hitting the first six?obviously he must have felt good!God that was so vain! M amazed y arnav didnt burst in to laughing! But knowing our journalist , one can expect such questions from them! Sometimes the questions asked in real our of the lamest category!

OMG arnav is so educated! A rarity for a cricketer! No i mean we have had engineer cricketers as well but i guess a masters from oxford! Thats something!

I think khushi's craziness will be enough to help arnav deal with his anger management issues! Given how much patience he is going to need with her!

Waiting for charity ball for their meeting!!

N thanks for the note in the end! Since you have clarified that you woudnt discontinue it, m more than happy! Take your time for updates!

Waiting for the next part!

Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago