New Virman FF- Tanhaayi- Ch. 7 pg 19- UPDATED!!!!

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Wonderful update!! <3 Very nicely written.. Loved their POV's.. Both can feel each other's loneliness and both are kind of eager to be with each other and share their thoughts.. Lovely! :D Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care :))

Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 11 years ago

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sajit

@sajit

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

cool looking forward to read more

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Both the chapters are fantastic.

I am so glad that they are

already feeling the connection between themselves.

The way you described virats happiness, his friend

getting amused seeing his smile.. then also helping

him realise the reason behind all these... superb job.

They both were searching each other and

when virat ran into her and that ear to ear smile... wahhh...

even I also had an ear to ear smile :)

Looking forward to their lunch date... ;)

Excited to know how the story will move forward...

how many obstacles are there that they have to face

in their way of love.

Then there is manvi's past also which I am

eager to know about.

So cont real soon and thanks a lot for

your pm's...

Take care...

tada...

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

awesome update thanks for the pm

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roshreb

@roshreb

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

superb update.both pov beautifully written!! can't wait for virman next meeting..continue soon!!

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

wow awesome update

seems like virman like each other

both are having same situation

plzzz do continue soon

thanks for the pm dear😊😊

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

sorry couldnt comment on last 2-3 updates ...
fabulous updates just simple and beautifully written ...the way their feelings confusions are cobnveyed are perfect and their latest too frendly and overwhelming convo was awesome 😃
waiting for the next part update soon plzzz😊

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Nandita

@Nandita217

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Its a beautiful story, two people who are in same condition or who have experienced same thing, surely attract each other!!!! How the love story of this story's virman will blossom, is the most exciting thing to wait for!!!!😊

You are a great writer, your updates are always in a flow...absolutely amazing!!!! Well done gal...👏

I can never get bored of this story, povs of characters are very important in a story, however now i would love to read more of virman's conversation & would love to see virman's story moving faster than it is already...otherwise the story is excellent, concept is awesome...i have always loved your work & i love this one too...& at the end of the day its totally upto you how you put up your story...i would be loving it anyways.😃

Update soon please...!!!!

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Sorry for not commenting for last two update . Was totally stuck up in studies .
Both updates were amazing . Beautifully written <3 both pov were mind blowing .
The way u have described everyhing is juz superb .
I really really loved it <3
Really eager to further . Looking forward . Update soon if possible ! Thank u so much for the pm :))