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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Deepthiya,

I am becoming a big fan of your writing, just also saw this ff of your and love every bit of it. The way you write and the expressions its just fenominal.

I like that Khushi is trying so much to bring back her Arnie from this ASR and that she is doing it for both of their future.

Arnav has been throught so much that he still eats breat butter and jam just to remind himself what his gone through just sad for someone who has worked so hard in life to get where he is.

Thanks for letting me be part of this journey.

Lovely ff and do pls pm me next time





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Posted: 12 years ago

On waking up the first thing crossing Khushi's mind of getting a glance of Arnav, she admiring the position he's sleeping in & then on getting back after her bath her eyes immediately searching him was sweet ... he occupying her mind all day & she wanting to wash away his loneliness with her companionship threw light on how she's gradually entering into his life

Why cant he buy a big bed? Isme bhi kanjoosgiri? 😆 😆 😆

Kaka apprehensive about Khushi's efforts to change Arnav's routine of bread & butter, Khushi convincing him that she would handle the situation but to be subjected to Arnav's wrath which was matched by Khushi's anger equally, Arnav suspicious about Khushi's nervous state shadowed by weak display of confidence, followed by their chasing game which brought tears of joy in Kaka's eyes was well framed

Khushi scared by the sudden proximity & the way Arnav was holding her, but then worried on seeing him panting for breath immediately making her search for his inhaler which startled Arnav making him understand that she too was a little uncomfortable with this new closeness, yet happy about the concern she showed towards him & then Arnav demanding her to apologize & then their conditions was enjoyable to read 🤗

Arnav wanting to hold onto a simple breakfast so that he would never forget his tuff days after his success but wanting to give credit to her efforts that he put forth such a condition pointed out how analytical he is about life & how much importance he is giving to the love of his life ... he's really sweet 😊

The gust of wind reminding Khushi of Arnav's pure & loving touch, of which she knew that it was beyond friendship giving an extra glow of blush on her face which she innocently thought to be too much makeup was a lovely scene

Loved the way in which Arnav said hmmm when she initiated to speak to him while Arnav was in his deep thoughts of how she's changing things within him. He deciding to tease her but unable to continue further on seeing her upset face & he loving & admiring the beautiful rosy blush on her face was an adorable scene. He feeling touched & unexplainable sense of happiness seeping into his heart on hearing her asking him to take care of himself slowing Arnav getting her care & attention & his heart over flowing with joy at the thought of being wanted & cared was beautifully narrated ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Khushi thinking out of the box & wanting to focus their designs for the middle aged women also & thereby winning customers of all ages was a shrewd idea. He suddenly asking about her not spending time for her dressing making her ask him if he was checking her out & their little convo creating a chaos in her mind if she really wanted him to pay attention to every little detail of her & a ray of hope arising within her on knowing that he did remember incidents concerning her while his heart wanted to tell her that nothing was forgotten to be remembered was very touching ... Arnavs POV in the last line was a very emotional point which u penned down in an astounding manner


The love blooming in between Arshi is so ethereal & the way you are narrating it at the right pace is marvelous buddy 👍🏼

Thanks for the PM. Love to read more ... WAITING

Edited by fleurs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ! Loved the bread part and their punishments ! And he onserves her dressing :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
A big sorrry for late comment yaar...
how can any one write like this yaar...
Ur just 👏brilliant...
day by day i falling in love with this story more and more yaar...
i forget to mention the vm in maha update yaar...
it was just mind blowing yaar...
i have goosebumps whenever i read Ur updates...
Ur just taking me to another world...😳
no words to say about the last update...
arnav feelings are beautifully written...
how much they crave for each other...
how much they care for each other ...
u made my day whenever i read ur update yaar...
thanks a lot for the pm yaar...
cant wait for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hai rabba! m simply loving how dey r bondin thru lil things! Their nok jhoks r adorable!
Missing Akash n Payal though..
Heart warming update.. !
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Posted: 12 years ago
just lovedd ittt!!! awesome u[pdate!!


thanks 4 the pm 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi am naziana am a new reader i love your story it was awesome am waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it 👏 waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww so sweet n generous update, khushi is trying her level best to bring him back, continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
a very lovely cute update.Amazing...😊 love the way Arnav is changing...

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