One day being Cinderella...Updated Chap 6 - Pg 30

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Heya Shah Didi ...

I m glad to find that you have posted your story

congrats on another new FF

Like I told You the concept is awesome

As always very well thought out and executed

Both chapters 1 and 2 were beautifully writte

Seems Like Uday ( the " fake principal" is Uday r8?) and his

friend know Manyata Singh

or perhaps they know her dad

since he is an attorney he must hav made himself

friends and enemies

I dont think taking manyata's phone from her was just a

mere prank

I vud hazard a guess that perhaps he took it to knw more about

her ... its just my detective brain going wild😆

Abh ya Rahul kaun hai ?

seems like a nice guy or mayb he cud b 1 of Karan's friends

trying to befriend Miss singh

Anyways excuse my overly dramatic interpretation

and imagination

I loved both the chapters

looking forward to more awesome updates

take care

Hugs

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MsAnicha

@MsAnicha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Hi Shahi, I'm Anicha!

I think you know me, will scrap you how...😆

The story is beautiful! It's very very interesting.. I absolutely LOVE it!

Uday seems to know Manyata already, atleast that's what I understood😕

And Manyata, well she's a character, total opposite of me!

But I like her, ALOT!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon...

You have it ready, so torture mat kar, aur bas copy paste karke, update do!

Waiting eagerly...

Also for your other FF's, specially Dekha and Truly Madly Deeply (I'm in love with that story!!!!!!!)

Stay safe, God bless!😳

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Jane

@Jane523

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

awesome dear...
does d principal guy which i think is uday ...
does he knows manyata ?????
i mean was it specially planned for manyata ...
d principal room incidence...
loved it...
continue soon...

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Omg just loved the second chapter in sure that guy is uday loved the scene between him and manyata but y are they after her what was karan actually talking about did uday know manyata from before really curious to know the precap is really interesting for the next chapter really can't wait for the next part please update soon and thanks for the pm

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

wooww woowww,it was awesomee!!!!!!!! dat princpal room momnt was soo rmnticcc,loveddd it!!!!! he opended her clip also and her glasses,par itni jaldi kyun kahtam kar diya,jaldi cntinue karrroo😊

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Asya0910

@Asya0910

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

that was really good!!!! Love the concept and the characters!!!! please pm and continue soon!!!!

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Hey di
How u? 😊
Sorry for the extemely late reply
Wow di, read both chapters in one go
Amazing, fantastic, mind blowing 👏
Loved it loads ⭐️
Plz continue with this
Wonder what Manyata did to Uday before that he got angry as soon as he heard her name
Poor Manyata
She fell for the trap set by Uday n gang😆
Very interesting
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon, very eager to read next chapter 😃

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Manveerangel

@Manveerangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

👏 👏 awesome 👏 👏
Hi di
It was amazing no more then amaZingit it was great
I feel bad for manyata poor girl
Wonder what happened between uday and manyta?

Precap was interesting
Thx for pm
Plzzz update soon

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Kritika

@Karkit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Wow nice update
it ws gr8 update
so sad 4 manyata uday ply game with her
thanks 4 pm n update soon

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nimra malik

@mimi.maik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Hey shaista...u hav no idea how much I m happy finally u hav introduced us to a new tale of yours...I really loved both first and second chapters...the concept is soo lush...so manyata is a generous , honest girl who is alone with her dad...so sad that she lost her mother. So she moved to new city and uday pranked on her...hehehe... Feeling bad for her. But some lil things r irking in my mind like why karan tell uday that manyata singh is coming and uday got angry...is there any previous connection of them??? And why uday stole her mobile...?? I hope everything Will be clear out soon. The sneak peak was just awwwsssuuum can't wait to read the third chapter...do continue soon and thank u for the pm...love u soo much and loved ur writhing a lot...hugs. and yeah sorry that I didn't comment on first chapter...sooo sorry, I was busy in uncle marriage I hope u understand. Plzzz jaldi update krna ok. :)