One day being Cinderella...Updated Chap 6 - Pg 30

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Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Already posted sorry! Keep me utterly enthralled!

Edited by Surish - 12 years ago

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Afsana01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Awesome

Love it.

Written super well.

Manyata's life is doing a complete switchover.

The guy that karan called who pretended to be the principal he is uday. right?

Already like his kamina ways but please do not let him really hurt.

Does he know her from before or something?

The promo for next chap has left me even more eager.

When will you update that? and dekha please

Thanks for pm.

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Tammie02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

It was so so lovely. you really are a star

Can relate to the storyline and school atmosphere.

Poor manyata is going to be teased and her phone stolen.

That fake principal is uday right?

But why does he know her? how?

She is a simple quiet almost nerd, there is more to this isn't there?

Thinking why karan warned him not to get angry and make sure it is her?

Waiting for next chap. please update soon.

Thanks for pm.

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Niceee Shahi

Manveer scene is very enjoyable

I knw the fake princi is none but UV 😉

And the Princi's name DK Bose?😆

well continue soon...😊

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SNOWWHITE83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

comment edited on page 7.sha have a luk.

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Hassie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

This was just great.

I am enjoying the story you are creating.

Written very well.

Thanks 4 pm.

Wish you could update others soon also.

Thanks

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Chand111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Nicely written. Makes for an interesting development in the story.

The fact that Uday seems to know or want to make manyata miserable

Why? guess further updates will reveal.

U have created quite good chemistry for two total opposite characters

The promo seems very interesting and adds to my curiousity.

Will be waiting for next pm.

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ricna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Whoop whoop sha. supafantaboulous that u updated so soon.

Thanks for that.

The update was very entertaining and my eagerness as increased tenfold for next update.

That fake princi was def our Uday. As always his entry is bang on.

But sha why does he want 2 hurt her or more so why was he expecting her?

Is this a high school prank or something more?

And this new rahul character is really genuine or a sidekick of karan and uday?

The promo was just too awesome.

I am literally picking out the various ways the next chapter is going to go down. lol well here is another story of yours left reeling for more.

How you do it I will never know.

Thanks again for pm and please continue soon. oh yes and looking forward to dreams update tomorrow.

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

wow awesome shahi!!
well I thought the first chappy to be a bit similar to a part in my story
but no!
you are way too awesome thaan me
and your writing too...
well it had really been too long since I read young manveer romance
and this is just awesome.
update soon dear!!

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rockingal09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Hey Shahi.. 😃 I'm Taniya 😊
Read both the chapaters in one go.. and srsly loved them.. 😳
They were Superb 👍🏼.. Beatifully writen..!! 👏 👏

No doubt u always cm up wid interesting stories n dis stry is intresting too... 👍🏼
Including dis SS rest 3 r also nyc n I iked dem too.. !!
I hope u'll update them soon..😃

well coming to d update
So in dis SS Manyata is lyk a studious girl and Uday is lyk enjoying his lyf in his ways... Looks lyk both r totally opposite ..!! 😆
dat principle office scene ws good. 😆. Hw uday made fool of her n took her cell n went away dat scene also i liked ... !! 😃

precap seems intresting...!
Thank for d PM.. Do conti Soon n plz PM me 😊
Stay safe.. Huggs .. !!