One day being Cinderella...Updated Chap 6 - Pg 30

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

I am again late I am so sorry
My exams are keeping me busy
The update was awesome
OMG he is son of a don
That is so cool
I love his attitude here
But as I read it
I have a confusion
He keeps mentioning he wants to rip her body
Does that means he only wants to claim her ?

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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Hey.. Shahi...

That was awesome...

Manyata and Maria bond really well...

And now Manyata has even found new friends...

Uday is the son of a Don...

That's interesting...

Manveer moments were the best...

I am glad that somebody is there to take care of Manyata...

Especially... Loved that comment of Kim's...

"She is HIS"...

Update soon...

Thanx for the PM...

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Hey shahi waiting for d next chapter eagerly pls update ASAP... n thanks alot for this awesome n mindblowing ss

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

hey!
please update next chappy soon
i'm waiting for it

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

awesome update uday is impossible he has his eyes trained for her hope she does not get because of him the way he question her like it his right and no one else awesome update thanks for the pm

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Farhana

@princess_farh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

awsm! Im only reading them all now! Its great!

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Farhana

@princess_farh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

aww this is js 2 amazing! Im enjoying every min of it! Plz do update more! sowi 4 the late response, was so bsy w xtra classes!

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priyamvika11

@priyamvika11

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Hey 😉 shista very nice story you have been though nice consept nd more over udhy and the underworld don son very
thrilling it is by the way waiting 4 your next update very very goood luccck 4 one day being a cindarala.
Hope 4 best
Tons of love 😃 😉 👏

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

loved it

y is he after her

wht is cooking in his evil brain

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#170

CHAPTER ONE WAS AWSOME LOVED IT
SORRY SORRY SHAHI DI I M SO SO MUCH LATE YAR
I KNOW DII BUT YAR BUSY HELL SORRY AGAIN
LOVED UR CHAPTER ONE IT'S AMAZING AWSUM
MANVEER AWEEE...LOVED IT MUAH
HUGXXX...!!!

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