One day being Cinderella...Updated Chap 6 - Pg 30

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Hey
How are you?
Coming to the update, I don't have words to describe how awesome it was!
Loved it to the core!
Manyata finally found some friends..
Hate that karan his so stupid.
Uday an underworld don's son?? Shocked to hell.
I hope uday doesn't do anything bad to manyata.
I hope he doesn't cheat or betray her in the future because I have a feeling that he might start acting like a goody-2-shoes to win her trust and then betray her trust.
I really like manyata she is sweet.
I hope manyata carries the pepper spray and uses it on uday, it will fun watching it.
I like this rahul he is a nice character.
It was wonderfully written!!
You did a superb job!
Do continue asap.
Thanks a lot for the pm.

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Ravneet Kaur

@Fantasyangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

superb update...

luvd canteen scene...

UV is really an evil person...

he wanted to kiss her...

kim, rahul, fatty and M scene was reminding me of twilight...

cont shooon...

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Tammie02

@Tammie02

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Simply awesome and totally loved it!!! Just did not want it to end.

I am undoubtedly one of your biggest fans shahi.

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

hey jiji
how are you?
i hope i am not being irritating
but can you please update your other ss
i mean DEK 2 as you left us on the edge
and thanks a tons for updating this
as the story proceeds i am growing more fond of it
i am loving manyata in this story
she is sweet and so innocent
and loved karan group
i am sure both karan and kim has a soft corner for each other
and then the intro reminded me of twilight
but OMG the thing uday is doing to her
he is the son of a don
so i can imagine that he is not the type of guy
who will love her
he is just using her
but i just pray he falls for her
want to see the possesive side of uday
i know i am being greddy hahahza
thanks for the pm
hugss
love anni

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Wow shahi awesome update, just loved it... UV the son of a gangster omg... This story is quite interesting

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nimra malik

@mimi.maik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

hey shah...hows u love???? 😃

firstly thank you so0o0o0o berry much for updating and giving us 4th chapter...I was so0o0o0o glad and happy when I found your p.m in my inbox. Now a kiss and a tight hug to you from mefor writing such a superly awsumulicious update. I am with lack of words seriously...it was thrilling man. u rocked shah...👏 👏 👏

coming up to update...u introduce us to maria...she seems very caring and kind...and kim rahul and DJ are also good hearted...thank GOD manyata have now good people around...😊 and uday is underworld don's son...OMG thats like a spice...😆 good idea.

The hell+heaven started on uday's entry...booosh poor manyata tried to escape but he found her... and then he kisses her on eyes...Awww lovely... i was thinking that why am not in manyata's place??? 😭 😭 😭... uday is now thinking alot about manyata, he really wants her... love is a far away thing for him i think...🤢 the whole chapter was soo pitch perfectly written and you described both uday and manyata's feelings greatly and yeah even how much i say thank you for giving us such a wonderful and amazing SS it will never be enough...so alot love and hugs from me...u r indeed a GOD gifted writer...and i am happy that you love your work and we love you...so do continue when you got time ok...thanks for the p.m...love you and hugs 🤗

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

rahul's grp is very sweet😊😊 aha uday ke aate hi sab tensed hai!! mnayta u cant gt away frm uday,he kissed her eyes,it was loevly,bt he is scaring her, hope he dsnt do ne evil thngs wit her!! uday jst wants to get her as kil predcted,bt i hope in the prcess he falls in love!!!!!!! lovedd manveer scenes a lott!!!!!!! cntinuee so0on and thank uu fr a long chappy!!!!!😊😊😊

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

heya 😊

u might not be knowing me 🤔

cause i never commented on any of ur ff's or ss's 😕

but i read all of them and love them a lot...😳😃

ur an ossum blossom writer 😉

and this story is so damn interesting 😃

so beautifully written...

and this chapter was so amazing...👏

i mean uday is son of a don ?? ...lol it was cute as well as hillarious...🤣😆

and finally manyata made some frnds...🤓

rahul, kim and dj are cute kind hearted peoples...

awww the last part was so cute

u depicted manveer's thought so cutely ...

loved it to the core ...👍🏼

p.s. plzz update dek dream continues ...despirately waiting for the update

LOVE ANMOL ❤️🤗

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

hey!
awesome updates dear, just loved it to the core
i love manyata in this story
she soo... sweet
& uday is son of underworld don's son
i hope he doesn't harm manyata
finally manyat found some friends
they r so nice, love them
manveer's scenes was superb
u have just written it beautifully
please do continue soon
also pm me if possible