Smitar's: Loving Khushi #3 Part 9(1A,1B) Pg 106 22/8

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dumas

@dumas

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

awesome update loved how arnav is tell her why he reacted and how he feel since the moment she fell in to his hands and why and how and what he did to keep her away from him and his heart that was wall before her entry awesome update

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PARVATHY44

@PARVATHY44

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

superb yet extremely emotional.loved arnav's explanation to his each deeds.

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sarozz

@sarozz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Wow yaar...
Arnav is pouring out all his feelings in front of her...
Like an open book...
Loved it...beautiful
Continue quick

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

OMG !!! 👏 I want to cry ... smita u make me smile and cry together ... u have magic in ur words ... power in ur quill ... very few writers have it !!

that has to be the most beautiful confession ever !!! god i wanna read more !!! each word of arnav's ... damn its piercing !!!!

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Meera

@sweetlife

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

update soon... cant wait for d nxt part.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

OMG...this is just so awesome...like re-living the journey again...from Arnav's pov...cant wait for the rest...and ur interpretation Rashmi...thanks for the pm...