VIRMAN FF:You are my love PART 19 updated 6.11.13 - Page 74

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhuharini



give me some more time dear... very busy with my exams... plsss😊



will wait... Take your time
all the best for your exams😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
All the best for exam dear...
After exam we not spare you...hahhh
Try to update soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

All the best for exam dear...
After exam we not spare you...hahhh
Try to update soon dear...



thank you😊

luv u dear🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshivirmanian

pls pls plss do pm me when u update

i ready ur full ff today its just awm
like they fall in love...
now this priti urrgghhh now what is she upto but i no my virman will b togther forevr..



thank you sakshi... I 'll pm you surely dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
The update is just awesome akka!👏👏👏

I'm out of words!😳

I'm just eager for the story to progress!😉

Sorry for commenting late!😳

Bit busy! sorry!😲

Tc! Love you akka!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

The update is just awesome akka!👏👏👏

I'm out of words!😳

I'm just eager for the story to progress!😉

Sorry for commenting late!😳

Bit busy! sorry!😲

Tc! Love you akka!🤗




It's ok my junior shakespeare... No sorry to ur sis... luv you tooo🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 16ii)


Hi buddies... Sorry for the delay in update. I am here with the rest of your 16th part. Hope you enjoy this long one...

Virat went outside the hospital room with some thoughts. Just then he remembered Manvi's call and he called her back. But it was not reachable. He called her several times and the result was same. He thought she might be busy and went to his house. He went to see V..ma to tell everything. But she was sleeping peacefully and so he went out without disturbing her sleep. He again walked carelessly with some tensed thoughts and was caught by Viren when he was about to hit the wall unknowingly. Virat got out from his traunce and stopped there itself.

"what happened bhai? Why are looking tensed and confused? Any problem?" he asked concernedly. "bhai... nothing problem. I saw Preethi yesterday. She was trying to pacify me wherever I go... though I didn't cared her. But today I hit her with my car accidentally and was little hurt. I took her to the hospital. There she explained me everything why she left me and I was little convinced too... We know already na, she loves her dad so much and he was her only support and her mother already hates her from those times... She said she left me for his sake. But donno why I still have a doubt on her... though my heart accept it, my brain denies to accept her words and it's quiet confusing too" he said worriedly.

"Virat... have you lost? What happened to you? You are very confused... Have you told Manvi about this? " asked Viren.

"No Bhai... I am trying her mobile since morning, but it was out of reach..." he said.

"Ok Virat... I have decided to do one thing. I wanna check whether she is still the same... If she cheat once again, I donno what I'll do? I will arrange a private detection to check her aim" said Viren in an angry tone.

"You are very correct bhai... even I don't want to trust her completely..." he admitted hugging him and they were distrupted by Virat's mobile tone. He saw it was Preethi...

Virat put it on loud speaker... "Virat... where have you went? I am searching you and I am very hungry now. Who will help me here?" she asked in a puppy tone. Both of them were annoyed by her speech. Viren signaled him that he will talk... "Hi preethi... I am Viren. Hope you remember me" he said. He also added, "You can use the nurse help na? otherwise wait, I'll send one of my maid for your help. Ok?" he said winking at Virat.

"It's ok Viren... I can mange yaar... bye" she said and cut the call irritanly. Virat was laughing at their conversation and said "No one can replace you Bhai"

After some seconds, he stopped smiling and said, "But Virat... you don't trust her. She is trying to be sticky. And don't be guilt on yourself... She fell down by her own and is now worrying. There is nothing wrong in your side... And try to say this to Manvi soon..."

Virat was quiet clear and satisfied after talking to Viren... But he's feeling very bad on himself that he still hadn't said Manvi about his past... She'll be worried after knowing this he thought unknowing the fact that she knew everything before their marriage.

It was now evening and still Manvi didn't call him... Virat was little angry but worried whether she was safe.

But Yes... Manvi was undergoing a very tough situation from the morning in Germany... In that morning, while she was on her way to the show in a cab... she saw a girl was chased by few gangsters and she was running scaringly to protect herself. Also she was not that fair like foreigners and resembles Indian skin colour. When she was running close to her cab, Manvi opened her cab door and pulled her hands inside the cab to save her. Both Manvi and the girl were quiet relieved thinking that the rowdies have gone. The girl was crying holding Manvi's shoulders to save her and Manvi was blinking without knowing what to do and how to save her. So she decided to take the girl along with her. After few minutes, their car was being chased by the same fellows and they hear the voices, "hey girls... stop here... otherwise we won't spare you" the voices are very cruel and spilling their arrogance.

Manvi was in a very tough time that she can't leave the girl alone in that hard state and so she wished to help her. She wanted to suggest Virat about some idea and she called him in that morning. But because of that dman Preethi's drama, he went hurriedly without attending her call. Her driver also escaped from the running cab frightened to those rowdies. She was all alone without knowing anything to do. But she thought that was the time to act bravely. Otherwise, she also will be stuck in that bait. She moved towards the driver's seat and drove herself the cab. She was continuously driving with that girl but those gangsters were not ready to leave them.

Suddenly, the cab struck in a midway and near a dark forest. They ran inside holding hands together. They were hell frightened and shivering in fear. They held each others fist tightly and seeing in all directions around the forest and hearing the rowdies sound very much near to them. Immediately, Manvi ran away holding her hand towards a bush and hided themselves in it. The gang of rowdies also came there...

They became very tired after a whole day running and the girls were in a state to give up at anytime. One of the rowdy came near the bush sensing something in it. The girls heart-beat increasing second by second and they were trembling in great fear of loosing their life. Manvi also got stuck into that terrible incident unfortunately and she had no other way... She can't leave a girl in that situation and go selfishly... Her eyes are blinking seeing him very near to them... It became red in fear... He saw Manvi's pink coloured stole which was very little bit outside the leaves and exposing them hiding behind. He took the stole harshly which was tied in Manvi's neck and she shouted suddenly "aahhh" in pain. This was now enough for them... They pulled her outside harshly and that girl also came out along with Manvi... They holded the girl's neck with knife... Manvi was holded by another man around her hands tightly... She was praying to god to help them and tears are running from her eyes... She also called Virat's name to protect them but no one was there around them to help... The two poor souls were struggling for life... She thought that was the last day for her.

The climate was showing some changes suddenly and some rain drops were falling from the sky... Manvi got an idea and she signaled the girl to get ready to escape. When the rain drop fell over the men who was holding Manvi, his hold got loosened for a second and Manvi used it and bend down to tale a fist full of sand and poured how much ever possible to her around most of the men. The men who was holding the girl with knife closed his eyes suddenly and she also did the same and both got escaped within a second from their eyes... They ran as much as possible and they got a small clue inside the forest to come out... Manvi asked the girl to take her to the German police... The girl took Manvi as she said.

Manvi explained everything to the police and helded the girl safely to them. The girl also got many details from Manvi like her mobile no, place...

Manvi went to her room safely with the help of a police and had a deep breath which she was holding from the long time... She saw the time and now it was mid-night. She took her mobile and called Virat immediately... Virat who was very tensed , attended it hurriedly to talk to her...



Manvi: Virat...

Virat : Manvi... are you ok? Can't you call me and say you are safe? You know how much tensed I am?

Manvi: sorry Virat... Actually...

Virat : stop it Manvi... I don't need your excuses.

Manvi: Arey... listen me na? I missed my mobile somewhere and now I got it and calling you... sorry my husband...

Virat : ---

Manvi: no reply? Still angry with me? I am soory na... you know how much I am missing you? I called you to talk but you are not caring me...

Virat : It's ok...

Manvi: But you are not smiling now...

Virat : (smiled hearing her words) Arey baba... I am smiling... Ok. How is your show today?

Manvi kept a silence without knowing how to say that to him... She knew he'll worry after knowing that.

Virat : Manvi... Are you there?

Manvi: Haan... but I can't hear you properly

Virat : may be due to some signal problem... Ok... let's talk tomorrow.

Manvi: Ok Virat... gud ni8... eat before you sleep. Ok?

Virat : Haan... gud ni8 Manvi.

Next evening, the girl came along with his dad to meet Manvi who was sitting there alone after the full day work...

Manvi saw the girl and walked towards her worriedly... "How are you dear? Is everything fine now? Are you alright?" she asked...

"yes I am fine... my name is Shree. He is my dad Dr.Sam... You know he is also an Indian " she said to Manvi and hugged her. She also added, "I forgot to say even my name in that horrible incident" she said laughingly...

"Thank you for helping my daughter Manvi... Actually they chased her to kill her yesterday... It was becoz of my personal problem and now I have cleared everything with the help of police... If you are not there, I can't see my daughter now... thank you beta..." he said holding his hands.

"It's ok uncle... elders should not say sorry. By the way your daughter is very sweet and acted brave in that place..." she said smilingly... After some sweet conversation, they bid good bye to her and Dr. Sam gave his card and said, "whatever help you need here, just contact me... I am ready to help you at anytime"

Manvi saw the card and surprised that he was an Oncologist... "I think god himself gave me all the problems only to show the way for happiness... really..." she said herself.

She ran towards the exit door and called him, "Dr. Sam... One minute plsss"

They stopped hearing Manvi's words and turned back seeing her running towards them... "Dr. Sam... I need your help... thank you for giving me this card" she said happily. Dr.Sam can't understand why she was saying that...

"You know... my mom was suffering from cancer... Now she was in her final stage. You are working in Berlin Medical Institute... such a famous institute for cancer treatment. Plss help my mom... plss doctor..." she pleaded him.

"I said I am ready to help you at any time... You saved my daughter and it's my duty to save your mom now... In our institute, there were many oncologists who were highly specialized in cancer treatments... we can consult them and I am sure we can cure your mom too... I'll help you here throughout the treatment... Happy?" he said smilingly... Manvi was now jumping in happiness and wanted to hug V..ma and Virat sharing this happiness... She wanna say this to her sister Jeevika and Shruthi... She was flying in air...

On the otherside, Virat was thinking that how he'll say Manvi everything... He thought whether she'll be the same after knowing the truth... Whether she love him after knowing he had hided this from her for such long days... He wished to say everything to her immediately...

In Germany, Manvi ran inside and called Virat to his mobile... "Virat you know... I am here with a very big news... Guess?"

"Manvi... I wanna say you something..." he said awkwardly.




On the otherside, "But Virat... I have to say the most important thing... which'll make you jump in joy... but I'll be not there to see your smile... miss you badly Virat" said Manvi with a mixed feeling of happiness and worries of missing him...

Virat was very happy hearing her joyfull words and asked, "This much happy news? Hmmm... You became the show topper... right?"

"No..." she said naughtily

"then say it soon yaar... I can't wait..." he said lovingly.

"I found a famous oncologist in Berlin for ma's treatment... You know, he is working in Berlin Medical Institute' which is very famous for cancer treatment" she said happily.

Virat was very happy hearing this and asked "Really Manvi? Will they treat our mom? Will they cure her cancer completely?" he asked happily... He can't talk further in that happiness...

Suddenly he jerked sensing that the damn Preethi came inside and hugged Virat from his back. His smile suddenly disappeared with a big sound of slappp... without realizing Manvi's call and shouted, "How dare you?"

So... that's it my buddies... hope you enjoy this. Wish to hear your comments and thoughts on this update.


thank you...


BYE BYE... TAKE CARE🤗

Edited by madhuharini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing
first one to comment OMG!
you write so well i love it sooo much
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Duggukede

amazing

first one to comment OMG!
you write so well i love it sooo much
continue soon
thanks for the pm



very happy that u commented first dear... thank u so much😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Abi it was amazing update dear
I toh fully loved and wants to read it more
haye re what an update just superb marvelous
and written very beautifully
eagerly waiting for next part
Thanx 4 upcoming Pm
update soon means soon Okie 😃😃😃😃😃
take care Sweety 😃

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