ARSHI FF: ON HIS DEMAND #1 Continued as OHD 2 - Page 26

Shit Arnav is two timing both Khushi n lavanya ...horrible.

Poor Khushi I feel really bad for her.

She has nobody to support her..

omg !

poor khushi...needless to say i feel really bad for her..lavanya i guess is going to kill khushi..do update soon...

WOW !!!!! Thank you for the update... It was awesome!!

Awesome... Please update next part soon...

fabulous update...khushi kitna pyaar se Arnav ka khayal raka...😊 Lavanya want to kill khushi...😡

WHAT THE? Lavanya has gone mad lol wanting Khushi dead & yay Arnav will be back sooner than expected and Nani did show Khushi as her Bahu so haha at her

omg, la is planning to kill the innocent khushi and this jerk asr is promising la that he will spend some quality time, why I feel that it could be mary who is the secret agent for la conspiring to kill khushi

Tis s d first tym i m readng ur ff... I mst say...OMG!! It ws wrttn beautifully. Bt i didnt lyk tat Arnav, nani, La..HELL! They were al so mean. I thnk Arnav's hatred for Khushi is smthng to do vd her mother. Bt if tat so, y innocent soul lyk Khushi to suffer? Wat s wrng vd tat Raizada? And Y she s stil lvng tere n RM? Cnt she has some self respect? Realy felt bad fr tat poor soul..only fw people lyk Khushi r existng n tis world. Al others r lyk that Arnav, La or Nani..dnt make khushi suffer more. Plz make her a strong girl and fi8 for hr ri8s.. Evn tat Bhuaji didnt trust her..and thnks tat she s also lyk her runaway mother..IS there is any necessity if the mom is bad or evil, the child is to be also lyk tat? Evn they lost contact fr many yrs..HELL! Evn she didnt knw abt hr mother fw wks bfore. Thn hw cud some1 accuse her lyk tat..nw m thnkng tis nt a fixn bt a real one whch was hpng to many poor souls n tis world. Thanx fr sch a beautiful ff. It realy enli8nd me abt tis cruel world. Wish no other girl shd suffer lyk tis. Do continue soon.

And i wish to read ur updates further. So vl u plz PM me.. Thanx n advance.