Khuda Hafiz .a Two Shot. KR - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

beautiful update😊😊..loved it❤️..and thanks for the pm😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha


tu. . .ja. .ja bhago yahan se. . Mai fst

haye last tym ap 1st the na this tym me 1st..😛
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

awesomeee update👏

loveee ttt😊
continue wit d nxt part soon😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

loved it so so so so sooo muchhh arya dear..
plz complete it soon..
waiting eagerly..😊😊

thankkk uhhh...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Banner credit - My dear frn Amira ji(..Amira..)

I was in our room, almost a month was over but still I couldn't tell her why I was here. I had seen her file, what was going on in her mind I was clearly aware of it.. her dream which was important for her. She was so different from that old Kria with a change in her look, she had matured so much in these 4 months.She understood things better now.

Earlier Kria was always in her tomboyish clothes now She was always in Indian outfits, her hair had grown longer. She looked cute before but now she looked more beautiful. I loved old Kria allot but this Kria made me fall more for her. I smiled alone, remembering the time which we spent together here.

*FLASHBACK*

It was Sunday, she thought of teaching me how to make an omelette as I had told her on our college trip, I was the worst cook ever. "Reyaansh its very easy. * I made a sulky face at that.

"So, firstly crack the eggs one at a time into a bowl, *I Nodded* Beat the eggs until the yolks and whites are completely mixed. *I again nodded* You can either use a fork or wire whisk to beat the eggs. *I again nodded* At this stage you can add salt, pepper, and other herbs and spices to the eggs as well. *I again nodded* Heat some butter in the skillet over medium heat. *I again nodded* Pour in the eggs, spreading them evenly with a spatula. *I again nodded* Adding a splash of milk or water will help make the eggs a tad fluffy. *I again nodded* Use a spatula to gently flip the omelette.*I nodded again* Keep cooking for another minute or two, until the omelette is no longer runny." She said, while making the omelette and I waited for her to complete it.

"It's ready", she smiled. I took the plate from her hand, "I love you, ur too sweet." I was about to take my first bite when she took the plate from my hand, "Reyaansh, that was mine. Now make it, I wanna see how much you learnt" That moment I wished I had paid little attention on cooking else, looking at her.

"Hah I can make it, get aside Jaane-E-man", I moved her aside from the cooking area but she stood next to me, "Rey, let me stand near you"

"How sweet"

"Stupid! so that you don't spoil the kitchen" I took the egg in my hand, "Now watch me, Firstly cracks the eggs" I took the spoon and hit the egg. A bit of egg fell on her face also, "Reyaansh, Egg tod ke omelette banana hai, egg ka keema nahi banana"

I gave an idiotic smile to her. She took the spatula and hit me thrice with it on my shoulder, "Just go and have mine, I'll clear the mess."

"Kria tum kitni acchi ho", she glared at me, took the belan in her hand. I took omelette and ran from the kitchen.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

*FLASHBACK*

"Rey, coffee" She kept the cup and popcorn bowl on the table, I didn't pay heed. She took her novel and began her reading, "Rey coffee! piyo", I looked away. She took my head in her laps, "Rey! Butter popcorn bhi hain"

"I'm not hungry and what are you doing here, don't you have to spend time with your office friend Piyush. He's so handsome, so good looking na." I said with a pout. "hmm! Your right", she took advantage of my condition. "Hmm! Go and Love him"

"Not a bad idea!"

"Mujhe chodne ka plan hai kya?", I turned to the other side on her laps. She pulled me up, I kept my head on her shoulder like a small kid playing with her locket. she kept her hand on my cheek, I pushed it away. she again tried to keep her hand but I again pushed it away.

Finally she she kept her hand on my cheek, "Rey! Agar main chali jaungi to iss monkeyman ko insaan kaun banayega" I smiled at her words. "Rey, I wish mom aapko iss condition main dekhti?"

"Oh Ya! I wonder what would she say that I was sitting on ur laps, I wish I could see her reaction. *SHIRLESS WONDER ON MY KRIA"

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

*FLASHBACK*

"Okay papa, take care. Bye" She kept the phone, In less than a month she had grown so close to my dad as if he was her dad. I was happy to know that she was a part of my family now.

She gave a pleading look to me, "Rey! please call her" I took the phone from her hand, "Kria! No" I had told her about Taani and She wanted me to apologize to her for whatever happened that day in fire escape. She took the phone from my hand and dialed the number, "Hello Taani! Main Kria bol rahi hooon. Wo Rey wants to talk to you"

She gave the phone in my hand, "Hello Taani! Wo I wanted to say that wo" my voice was trembling. "Haan bolo. Rey"

Nervousness was there in her voice too, "Wo I wanted to say ki wo main, Taani" Kria held my hand for assurance that I was doing right by saying sorry. "Taani! Wo uss jo bhi hua in fire escape, I shouted on you. I'm aah I'm sorry for that" There was no response.

After few seconds, "Rey! You know after that day I so badly wanted to say sorry for what I did. It was my stupidity to behave Kria, I never wanted to destroy your memories with her but I didn't realise how much I've hurted you by my act."

"No! infact thank you for making me realise, hat she meant to me."

"May be we were not meant to be, but Im very happy for both of you. Take care, byee"

"Take care" I kept the phone, it felt so much better after clearing everything. She kissed my cheek, "My good boy."

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

My chain of thoughts was broken by the doorbell, I got up to open the door. Kria was back from her workplace, I smiled and hugged her. "Kria, I'm going" I said n left for jogging. She pulled me back n gave a peck on my lips.

"Come soon"

While jogging I was thinking how to tell her Why I was here. What will she think? Will she agree?

I reached back home, she wasn't there in room, hall, balcony, after I searched everywhere I moved towards the kitchen. She was there[her look], busy with dinner preparation. I stood at the door looking at her, a few minutes later she saw me standing there.

"Hey! give me 20 minutes I'll quickly make something for you" She said.

I moved my head in negation, took few steps forward towards her. She was standing near the slab, my gaze was fixed on her. She moved back as I came closer, finally she hit the slab. I took her lips in mine, she pulled back few seconds later.

"Kya hua Rey?"

I again moved my head in negation, "Chalo"

"Kahan rey?"

Before she could ask any more question, I pulled her inside the car and drove her to the same club where we had our first meeting. In club we danced like maniac's but this time together unlike last time giving each other competition on whose better and also made sure that nothing breaks as this time no one would come to give our bail.

We were back home tired, it was difficult for us to even walk properly due dancing so much. I opened the door of our room, She removed her heels and fell on bed. I too did the same with my shoes and fell beside her.

"Thank you so much Rey for this evening" She said.

"Your welcome"

"You know Rey, I thought today Madhuri Dixit's ghost had entered you, Deva Rey Deva Prabhudeva bhi sharma jaate aapko dekh kar" She teased me. I pinned her hands back and came upon her, "And you were no less you were even dancing like mad"

"but my my level of madness was less than yours" She showed her tongue, I held he hands more tight and kissed her wildly. Her eyes were closed, I slowly removed the saree from her shoulder. She let out a gasped at my action, I kissed her throat line within few minutes her and mine clothes were some where on the floor.

I was about to make my way into her but realization struck my head, I left her hands and moved out of the bed towards balcony covering myself with a sheet. She wore my shirt which was lying on the floor and came behind me. I felt her hand on my shoulder, "Kya Hua Rey, I've noticed since the evening you want to say something." I hugged her.

"Say it!" She said while hugging.

"Kria, I know I'm being selfish. I came to Dehradun only for you but not to stay with you here. I came here to take you back with me to Mumbai though I love your city allot but I want you to stay with me in Mumbai with our gang like before. I'm not forcing you to come with me the decision is completely yours."

She had tears in her eyes, I didn't understand she was happy or sad. She slapped me hard on my face, "Stupid, of course YES"

"And what about your dream of establishing your own dance academy?" I looked her. "Reyaansh you are the most important one to me. Tum ho na mere saath phir academy chahe Mumbai mai ho ya Dehradun main what difference does it make."

I took her in my arms and continued what we had left in between.

The End

Sooo Hww wass it... dooo tell... :)

P.S- My dear yogini ji... aap Plzzz apne ideas... yaha post na kiya karen.. 😳 mera sara suspense paani paani ho jata hai... :)

And Khuda Hafiz means goodbye.. Urdu is my state language socha thodi use kar loon 😆




Edited by K.R_ackraal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
res
unres. . .
Sorry 4 the late unres...
I just luvd the last part. .
That omlet scene was so intrstng. . .
Ending s so cute. .
@amira. . Banner is awesome. . Bt more z taani's pic. . Bt vrinda di's pic is so cute
Edited by sanju_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Res..
*******
Unres..
*******
Yay...me 2nd..!!
Acha cuming to update..
Atlast u updated..aj update nhi milta tha na to me apko definitely mar dalti🤣
Acha update mast tha..👏
I liked it...opps loved it..
Haye KR kitne sweet hai..love dem yaar..😳
Rey ne us T ko sry bola.. 😲 r u serious..?? Wht wrong wid u..?? 😡
haye toh ye tha reason rey ka idhar ane keliye..hmm..
Thnxx uss T ke zada parts nhi dale..nhi toh me apko mar dalti..🤣
Haye rey ko slap iss reason se padhne wala tha..hmm..mene kya kya socha tha😆
Wese mee guess crt kiya tha kriya ne hi slap kiya..
Haye ending was super cute..
Thnk god u gave happy ending me toh dar hi gyi thi kal jab apne *u never knw* bola tha..
Wese thnxx once agn fr such a lovely os..😃
Love yaa..❤️
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Res. . .
Unres. . . . .
Superb update. . . .
Hahyee. . . .it was so mushy-mushy. .
Lovd the flashbacks. . .
1st omelette wala. .jaha rey omelette banane pe kam kr kriya pe zada dhyaan de raha tha. .🤣
2nd. .coffee aur woh shirtless wondr wala.. .🤣
3rd. . .jaha kriya cums close to rey, and rey appolzises to chudail 4 such a bakwaas reason. .*i totly ignrord dis part*
then kriya cooking in such a hott saree. .and rey usse same club leke gaya and they were dancing like maniacs. .🤣
then their intimate scence and rey bech mai chod k gulty feeling and tels her d truth n again they bck 2 busines. .🤣
haiyee. .writter ji aap toh chaa gaye. .
Awsome os loved it. .
Abilasha k liye liye likha. .*pout*
Abb ek new concept soch aur mere liye likh. .*chirpily*
shukriya aaj update krne k liye. . .wrna bhagwaan aapki raksha krta. .🤣
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

NO MORE COMENTS. .m out of here.

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