Arhi OS: Broken Part 2 Pg11 2/9 (complete)

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niksh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

amazing update!!!
poor khushi..😭

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Dandelion

@nikita-nair

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Beautifulll dr...

excllnt...no words 2 describe..! u hv jotted everything dat i had xpected 2 read..!!

i thought u'l neva updte d 2nd part...

thnk you for this..!!!!!!!!!!

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Vaibhavi Mane

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Not every story comes with a happy ending... i have heard and felt the same thing once and i can understand what it takes to move on...

Great story... and it needs guts to show your vulnerable side to the world... hats off..

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sruthick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

She lovd him...
Care 4 him...
Bt wat did he return...!! Pain..!!
He hurt her...
Poor Khushi...She suffered alot...
Its good that she decided 2 leav him 4evr...

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

That was a nice ending dear

If that's how he behaved he deserved that only

Good that she gave freedom to him

HE deserves that only for hurting her and not any more chance

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

only khushi was a true friend!

he just kept on using her and i really happy with her final decision!

he got wat he deserved!

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Fau Zi

@lazylad8-FauZi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Sometimes in real life we have to give up coz that's the best thing to do...give up n move on!!!!

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YaSha0512

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

I hate to say this as I could never imagine Arshi seperated
But Arnav deserved that he was being a right t**l
Khushi forgave him countless times n all he did was use her
She deserves lots better
Hope he realized how pathetic he was
Thanks for pm

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Camlin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

After reading this short story, I don't have much to say. It is like almost everything has been already said!

Being too good to someone is a mistake momentous than not being good at all. By, giving everything to one person is like laying yourself bare, letting them play with you and giving a control over you which nobody should have except yourself. A relationship, of any kind, is a relationship only when both the parties are equally involved and invested.

Here it was clear Arnav had never been what Khushi had thought him to be, even from scratch! It was clear from the moment when after his break up he even ignored Khushi. Khushi was always altruistic whereas he downright selfish. How on earth was this relationship even expected to work? And, the collapse was anticipated and inevitable.

Unrequited love has only ever done damages and this story is an example. It would only be prudent for Khushi to move on and forget him as a bad dream.

I have no words for Arnav. He could not respect friendship, the very basis of almost every relationship and he says he is pining for his lost love? He is playing double-standards so shamelessly. Seriously I am not wasting my time talking about that guy!

If nothing else, this story teaches us to chose the people we bond with wisely! Giving yourself away too much is almost fatal and jerks will always exist on this face of earth.

Ananya, all my thoughts are in context with story and I am in no way judging you or that guy. You are smart enough to chose best for yourself!

As, for the writing part; all emotions were beautifully portrayed and even Arnav's jumbled and confused thoughts were penned down very thoughtfully. 😊