Swaron SS: Am I just an Outsider? - Page 3

Originally posted by: VruShan_SwaRon

Hey Brilliant start.👏👏

And seriously I want to see something like this in upcoming episode.

Loved the way you showed hurt Sharon and I am glad that Swayam realized that he should have told Sharon.👍🏼

Please continue, would love to see how things unfold and together SwaRon expose that Adi.😃

Please PM me when you update.😳

Originally posted by: rohan_smile

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hey really nice yaar...

maine socha nahi tha aisa bhi ho sakta hai...

but really well thought...

and yaar aadat ho gayi hai...aapki achhi writing padhne ki so...

i dont mean u write in the same way...

this was shayad the second one on the current tracks...

and it is nice... i mean from the thought process from the future aspects its well written

and its damn clear we want the second part...toh...

update soon...

Rohan :)

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

awesome as always

loved this os but plz convert it to a 2 or 3 shot

frm which corner of ur brain dou get such nice ideas to write upon

loved it a lot n wanna know more dat how does swayam make it up with her

plz continue n update soon

thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: pooja123456

wow!
well written
update soon!!!

Originally posted by: HSFA

Loved it totally awesome 👏👏 Totally apt to the ongoing track. The title is very interesting!

Awww Sharon 's dialogue is so touchy.

Plz do pm me when u update next part really wanna read it :)

Can't wait to see how Swayam will handle her and about other developments as well.

Originally posted by: smartypantstanu

Thank you 😃

This is the 4th one the current track... Kya karu jab se Swayam aur Sharon officially commit hue hai tab se future track predict karne ki aadat ho gayi hai 😆

Thanks again 😃