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nia333

@nia333

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Posted: 11 years ago

#591

Hello Marry

Happy New Year to u too dear 😊...pics are really very cute n nice dear 😛...loved these pics...thanks for d pm...😃

Love U ❤️
Take Care 🤗

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: nia333
Hello Marry

Happy New Year to u too dear 😊...pics are really very cute n nice dear 😛...loved these pics...thanks for d pm...😃

Love U ❤️
Take Care 🤗

thanks dear 😊

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prathe

@prathe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#593

hi sorry i am a bit inactive nowadays so late comment
pls do continue soon waiting for u r updates as always😛

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: prathe
hi sorry i am a bit inactive nowadays so late comment
pls do continue soon waiting for u r updates as always😛

I will update soon

Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#595

I know after time I making this story but u all know reason
Part 15

Kapoor mansion

All are worried when they heard manvi news they also want to vadhera house so Mr & Mrs. kappor and simmi came vadhera house
to meet manvi

Vadhera mansion

M : manvi still blarring same thing pls save don't to this pls pls don't do this pls don't kill I am requesting u stop stop don't do this

Virat , Jeevika and viren can't see her like the fear show her face make hurt and there heart all 3 of them thinking happen to her face she saying all this thing there some harm her so much and try to kill her that after loosing her memory she get fear that incident all 3 are looking manvi helpless eye and same goes to Arjun he can't see her sister like this he every time trying to all happiness to her and trying she should get nice sleep and nice life but the dream always make her in worst condition

while all thinking in there thought they door bell ring its late 12 clock and vadhera people came out from there room see who came late night and when they open the door

Vn : viren mr. kappor u r hear at time

PK : I want to meet my daughter where she

Vn : Came she is sleeping

All vadhera and kappor and simmi marched viren room and when they she there daughter they couldn't hold they tear Mr And Mrs
kapoor near manvi

Sk : manvi my daughter see u r mother is hear pls relax everything fine don't worry beta just relax

Pk : yes beta relax and looking Arjun and ask Arjun what Dr sad its true she again get that negative image

A : Yes dad Dr give injection and tell her fever will get down till morning

D : Mr . Kapoor relax come with us manvi she will fine don't worry

Sb : Mrs. kappor came late she rest and jeevika,viren ,virat and arjun nr her u should come with us and some rest

Sk : How could I take rest when my daughter in this condition and we are helpless and not able to do any thing for her

Vm : Don't Mrs. kapoor manvi will be ok and if get to know that u all are hurt seeing like this then thing how much she will hurt try to understand come with us

S : Arjun know how is manvi her fever less or not

A : Yeah but simmi how long I will see my sister like this u know mannu is not only my sister but she is first baby

S : I know and she not only u r but my also first baby and all are with her see one day see will became fine

A : I hope that day come soon

Seen so much love for manvi jeevika , viren , and virat are happy that she get such love able family u taking care her so much but they couldn't understand what happen to her and how she meet this family

V : (In mind thought) Virat looking at manvi what happen to u why behaving like this I hope there is not big thing happen but looking at u I real scare there some thing happen which is couldn't able find out pls came back to life I beg u

J : ( In mind thought) Mannu My little sister u know I can't afford a single hurt on and seeing like thing I am dieing

Vn : Manvi I don't what happen to u but I will find out and this is promise u make u r life like this they get punishment I will never let live peace because I can't see u like this

Night gone and morning came manvi get concussion and looking she not able to know wear she is and seeing the room

A : U woke know how are u

Listening arjun voice Jeevika ,viren,virat,simmi are came near manvi

M : Bhai wear we are and whose room is this

J : Know how u feel

M : Much better but

V : Not u just came in concussion and asking so many question just keep quite and take a rest

Arjun again look virat and his concern about manvi he can't figure why he so much caring not he but all family member

Vn : Ha manvi just take rest u r in vadhera house

M : Bhai

A : Ha we are in vadhera house u get unconscious and u get again fever so they tell us to stay hear

M : but what about mom, dad

S : Mom and dad also hear

Sk : Manvi beat now how are u

listining Suman kappor voice all are turn and see mr amd mrs kappor and all vadhera came to meet manvi

Pk : Prem kapoor came near manvi and put is hand on her forehead and ask how are u

M : Mom ,dad just chill I am fine

And they heard another 2 voice hey girl friend and best friend

all are looking at door Ansh and Sia and they both came running and sit on bed near manvi

Ansh : Yeah what happen to u dadi say u not feeling well

Sia : And u know we both want to came and sit near u but Vm And Sb sad if we can't sleep u will feel bad

Ansh : So we eat dinner and sleep and know came to meet u know I don't like u feel bad

Sia : Ha So know came hear so will talk and play and little little u can take rest

Ansh : Because we know how bore when u don't feel well and all day sleep in bed I am also feel bore

Sia : I am also feeling bore u know My mom said me and Ansh behaving like our Auty my mom sister

All family listing ansh and sia talking and smiling

M : Making pout face I also didn't like I will freshen up then will talk ok and play

Ansh and Sia : yeah

V : Manvi u r still not feeling well and u want to play

Ansh : Chachu why u have problem she my girlfriend and I am playing with her

V : Oh yeah I forget thanks t remind me ( showing cute angry face to ansh)

Vn : Ansh ,virat be quite first she take fresh up take break fast then can play

D : yes viren is right know come all of get fresh and will all meet for break fast

Pk : No thank know we should leave u all are very nice people u allow as to stay night hear and u all are take care of my daughter nicely and we should leave

Sk : we are really thank full all of u

Vm : we are done any thing big u saying thank to us

Sb : She is like our daughter only

Vn : And know more discussion u all are doing break fast her only right dadaji

D : Right beta

After finishing there break fast kapoor left there house leaving sad vadhera because with them manvi also left but before living vadhera house kappor invite vadhera for Arjun engagement

Finish

I know I am not good writer but if u like then press like button and give u r comment and if u don't like my both the story so tell me I will discontinuous my both the story because sending pm and getting less response I don't want to disturb any body I know harsh little but such less respone I deciding to discontinuous my both story and I am sending this part pm those only u have response my last part

And if I didn't get nice response I am discontinuous both story

Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#596

Nice Update..!!! Waiting fr maanvi's memory to trigger...Thanks for the PM!!!

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Awesome update..

What happend to Manvi..

The Kapoors really love her...

But she belongs to Vadheras...

Sia and Ansh are soo cute..

Pleasee update soon..

And thanks for the PM...

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

Nice update dear

Loved it

waiting for manvi to get well

Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#599

wow after a long time loved it do continue soon
manvi memory and what has happened how did she reach kapoors
pls do continue soon😳
dont discontinue please😛