TISHNAGI - RTMC FF LAST PART updated on Page-88 (21-9-2014) - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover

wow happiness is at the door for veer and ananya

may be😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry di...plz forgive me...maine na hi cmnt kiya na hi like or apse next part mang liya...di bat ye h ki mai pmt ki preparation kr rhi hu or mujhe bilkul time ni mil pata...isliye main cmnt ni kr pai maine abhi tishnagi ke sare parts pade or mujhe apka ff bahut acha laga or excitement me apse age ka part mang liya sorry di gussa mat hona...ye thi meri ramkatha...plz maf kr dijiyega...
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Posted: 11 years ago
di ab bari h cmnt ki...overall story is fabulous,superbbb...di padke to sara stress hi bhul gyi starting bahut jakkaas thi dono ka intro or first meeting...or office ke seen ke kya kahne i m to excited but ye excitement to tab ud sa gya jab rudra ne ananya ke sath itna bura kiya or ananaya bhi iske liye veer ko blam kr rhi thi...ananya ko kitna hurt hua maja to tab aya jb ananya or veer ki shadi hui mujhe laga ab rudra ki band bajegi but vo dust atma...bhagwan kitna bura h vo rudra use ananya ki feeling ki koi value ni h but hamara veer ananya se kitna pyar krta h di bhagwan jaldi sab acha ho veer or ananya ke bhich...chaliye apne to hame bata diya ki iske piche veer ni tha...but jo bhi veer to by god use ni chodega...di ye ff me abhi to sb acha hone wala h na last part pada maine mujhe pad kr bahut positive feeling a rhi h ki ab kuch to acha hone wala h...vaise di ap naraz to hogi meri harkat se but i think ap samjh gye hoge meri problem...but next time i will try to give u cmnt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry di jaldi jaldi me dang ka cmnt ni kiya but pakka exam ke bad jarur karugi...thank u for such a luvly ff...sorry once again...luv u and missed u di... :) :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow superb.sry 4 late yaar.Veer wanna do a fresh start.nd i think Anu will also support him.bt ye Rudra ko to bhi punishment milna chahiye.cant see Anu nd Veer being neglectd
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the parts from the first. Really di awesome thinking and writing. Wonderful story. Do continue...
With love,
Kanika
ps-sorry for commenting after many months as i told u in fb itself. Forgive me. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART - 18

VEER and Ananya gradually moving in their relation. Though she wont comfortable yet. Neither she accept him as a life partner nor she is so much happy with destiny's decision. Hesitation, akwardness are still bounding them.both of them adjusted themselves with each other but not taking step for their relation. Veer taking very good care of her and her every need but he wont imposed himself on her.

One month passed and Ananya still searching for the clue. She wants to know the name of culprit whi spoil her life and framed Veer. Now its clear that the one who did all this was enemy of both Veer and Ananaya. Ananya roaming in her room scratching her head who was the one who harm both of them. She was lost in her thoughts when she hear Veer's blabbering. He was cursing someone and threing files here and there.

Ananya feel concern and asked to him. 'kya hua Veer?' she asked softly.

'meri ek file nahi mill rai. Bahut imp thi.' Veer ans back indulging in his search.

'tell me i will help you.',Ananya offered.

'no its ok i'll manage. Have you take your tablets and juice?' though he was busy still her tension bouncing in his mind. Both cares for each other.

'ha baba sab liye. Now can you pls tell me which file you are searching for?' Ananya intrupts and start searching with him.

'are main kar lunga.' Veer doesnt want troubling her.

'ha wo dikh ra hai. Pura kamra papers se bhar gaya hai.' Ananya divert his attention and showed the condition of room.

Veer glance at the room and his mouth wide open first. Then a wide smile came on both's faces. Veer told her. 'omg. Aaj albert kuch files leke gaya the store room me rakhne k liye kahi usme na ho.' Ananya reminds herself.

Both ran to store room full of old crap and almirahs. 'OMG ab kaha dhoondhege is kabad me?' Veer felt annoyed

'you dont worry main dhoondhti hu.' Ananya assure him.

'nai sath me dhoondhte hai. Tum us taraf dekho main is taraf dekhta hu.' Veer send her t one corner and start searching the file. Some cabinets open quickly and he wont found in that some are locked. So Verr goes to her mother's room for keys. She was not at home. Both his parents were not at home so he open their almirah for keys. He was searching keys madly. He jerkly open the cabinet due to which one file falls from the clothes. All papers falls from it.

's*** ab ye kya ho gaya. Jaldi se collect kar deta hu warna mom gussa ho jayegi.' Veer said to himself. He start collecting the papers scattred everywhere in room.

He was busy in collecting papers when Ananya came behind him in room and saw what he had done. 'Veer what is this? Yaha bhi sare papers gira rakhe hai?' Ananya said annoiyngly.

'maine jaan k thodi na kiya hai. Pata nahi ye file kapdo me kya kar rai thi. Mom bhi na.' Veer irritates.

'tumhari mom dekhengi to naraz ho jayengi. Tumhe unka almirah nahi kholna chahiye tha. Wo aa jati tab le lete keys.' Ananya cautioned him.

'hello meri mom ka wardrobe hai. Or main sirf keys le raha ho wo b us kabadkhane ki.' Veer wont like her sugesstion. He need his file as soon as possible. He noticed that Ananya is lost in one papers. Her gestures switching frequently.

Veer took move ahead and read her wrinkled forhead. 'kya hua?' his voice alerts Ananya and she quickly hide the papers behind her back. Her widned eyes were not looking in his eyes. Her breath is halted and hand turn cold.

'kucchh nahi Veer kuchh nahi?' her lips fumbling and voice lacking confidence. Hence she looked up in his eyes but it clears to Veer that she is upto something. Casually he doesnt force Ananya for anything neither he touched her without her permission but her weired behavior make him curious. Veer went closer to her and raised his arm behind her back. 'kya chhupa rai ho Ananya?' he is suspecious.

'nothing Veer.' Ananya stepping backwards till she tagged against the wall and locked between Veer and wall.

'to firr ankhe kyu chura rai ho? Tumhari aankhe saaf keh rai hai you are hiding something. Ye papers kya hai dikhao mujhe. Ye isi file me se gire hai na to tume kyu itna intrest hai.' Veer snatching papers from her and Ananya trying every possible way to keep him away from those papers.


'then why you are hiding those papers show me?' Veer over powered her.


'Veer you hurting me pls stay away from me.' Ananya yelled over him.


This moment Veer is not hear her any word. Not even her yelling effects him. He wants to know at any cost what she is hiding from him. Veer snatch more forcily and pulled papers from her grip. Ananya struggling for snatching those papers again from him but it wasnt possible for her. Veer raised up and Ananya jumping which is not allowed in this state of her pregnancy. Veer made her sit calmly and strictly commands her not to move an inch.
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PART - 19


Ananya wont want him to read the papers and she still struggling to divert his mind. She even pretends that she having a pain in her abdomen. Veer too was stubborn. He instantly asked for check up but wont leave the papers for once. Ananya's all efforts go in vein. Veer start reading papers and Ananya closed her eyes in sore. That was an adoption papers. Veer start reading them and he lost everything in his life in just a swift moment. This paper declared that he was adopted by his parents offically on the time of his birth. Veer's head start spinning. Papers dropped from his hands and tears float from his eyes. Meantime his parents came back from the party. Both get confused seeing Veer and Ananya in their room.

'tum dono kya kar rae ho yaha?' Sakshi asked them confusingly. Veer raised those papers towards both in ans. Sakshi and Aadiya looked him confusingly and glance the papers. Both's eyes widned looking at the papers. Sakshi's eyes too turn wet at the corners. She rush to Veer and hold her son.

'mom mere adoption paper. Apne mujhe adopt kia tha? Aap dono mere parents nahi ho?' Veer broked down and his voice too. Aaditya to get shattred. The secreat they hide from whole world came out suddenly. Hearing this noise all other too came there. Sakshi trying to calm him but he completely shattred this moment and all were in shock. Even adhiraaj was unaware of this truth.

'Veer pls look at me son. I am ur mom and he is your father.' she is conviencing him. Veer turn stiff. He wont move and not hera any voice. He lost his identity today. Aditya too came to handle him.

'Veer look beta. You are our son and no paper can change this truth.' Aaditya to trying and all his words wont proven effective. They were convincing him but wont effects him. Suddenly he rushed out and waved towards his room. All followed him and he locked herself in his room. Ananya scared with his reaction. Rudr beat the door and called him again and again but he wont ans.

'mumma pls kuchh kariye mujhe darr lag raha hai.' Ananya pleads to Sakshi. Sakshi nodded and order Rudr and Saksham to broke the door. Both pulled from outside and after a hard struggle finally they sucedded in opening it. The room was filled with darkness. Rudr was about to enter but Ananya ran inside quickly and locked the door again.


'pls mumma is waqt mujhe handle karne deejiye. Trust me pls.' she requests. Though Rudr objects but Sakshi convienced with Ananya.

'nai Rudr she is right. Right now only she can handle him.' Sakshi confirmed shortly.

'but mom Veer needs all of us this moment.' Rudr objects.

'i think your mom is right. Hum Veer se subah baat karenge. Is time wo shock me hai or kuchh b samjhne k liye uska calm hona zaruri hai.' Aditya convienced with Sakshi and order all to go their bedrooms.

Ananya moved towards their bed and found him sitting on a bed completely shattred. She hestatingly put her hand softly on his shoulder. No response from his side scared her alot. She frequently moved to face him. His stiffned so Ananya bend on knees to glance on his face. She wont know what to do but she determined. So she cupped his face and tilted upwards. She glance in his teary eyes.

'i have lost everything Ananya. My name, my identity all are fake. Nothing is mine.' he broke before her which somewhere effcts her badly. Seeing him shattred her heart ached badly. She too crying with him.

'Veer pls dont said that. Kya ek kagaz ka tukda tumhari mom k pyar se bada hai? I agree the wont gave you birth but kabhi unhone is baat ka ehsaa tumhe nahi hone dia. Pls Veer aise react kar k unke pyar ko gali mat do. She loves u evn more thn Rudr. Main ye baat in do mahino me samjh sakti hu tu tumne to apni puri life unke pyar k saaye me betai hai.' Veer kya aaj tumhare liye us pyar ka koi matlab nahi hai jo sab tumse karte hai? Pls Veer sambhalo apne aap ko. You hurting your family and their emotions.'Ananya boosting him and conviencing him that Sakshi loves him alot. 'tume ye sach aaj pata chala hai par unhe to shuru se pata tha par kabi unhone tume is baat ka ehsaas nahi karwaya firr tum kyu aise react kar k unhe praya kr rae ho?'

'Anaya tumne ek bar kaha tha ki wo mujhe kahi se utha k laye hai. Tab mujhe bahut gussa aaya tha. Par dekho woi sach nikala. Tumhara mazak aaj meri zindagi ka kadva sach bann k mere samne khada hua hai. Wo sach me mujhe pata nahi kaha se utha k is ghar me laye itna pyar diya.' Veer is not in himself. His pain is reflecting in his voice. His words are not clear but piercing in Ananya's heart. She stood up and hugged him. Veer's arm wrapped automatically around her waist. Both shedding tears this moment. She can feel his welterdenss. The thumping sound of his heart and his uneven breath. Ananya stoked his back to make him calm.


Ananya wants him composed at any cost. She snuggled him more and he too tightened his grip around her waist. She can feel his tears, drenching her belly. Ananya rested her head on his and stroke her soft fingers in his hairs. She is soothing his pain. Her little gesture is proving pleasured to him. He found solace in her warmth. They stayed for few minutes in the same posture untill Ananya's wincing moan broke their trance.


"Ahhh" she moaned and Veer instantly freed her. He remove his arm from her waist and felt guilty for hurting her.


"Kya hua Ananya? Are you ok? I am so sorry..." he aplozised but Ananya cuts him in between,wont allowed him to complete.


"Veer your baby kicked me. See use b achha nahi laga ki uske papa ro rae hai." Ananya confessed in the rythem of her emotions,without thinking for once. She wont even realize that without her permission her heart accepted Veer as a father of her baby.

A weak smile came on his lips. He placed his hands on her baby bump. "I am sorry baby. Papa promise you,from now i wont cry. But promise me you wont hurt your mumma. She is so sweet in this whole world." He to confessed his feelings in flow of emotions. Both's eyes met and they lost in each other for few seconds. Veer broke the trance lowering his long lashes. Both again felt hesitation and awkwrdness.


"I think ab tume sona chahiye. Or Veer please ek baar jo maine kaha use thande dimag se sochna. They all love you alot." Ananya gave his quilt and said calnly with a sweet smile.

Veer nodded and went on his couch. He covered himself and think about the moment they both just lived,"i have to be strong and be careful when i was around her. Today i hugged her. Dont know how she is feeling. I just hope she wont take me wrong." Veer was still thinking about Ananya's reaction as he wasnt sure what she is thinking righr now. He determined to keep distance from her furtherly.

While Ananya was thinking something else."Veer main tume aise tutne nahi dungi. Tumne har situation me mera sath diya hai. Now its my turn. I will always stand by your side whenever you needs me." She glance back and found him sleeping so she to stirred again and close her eyes to grab some sleep.

Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
double updates nice parts dear loved them
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n double splendid updates! Well written! update soon

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