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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART - 6


THE girl dragging Veer with him outside. Veer allowed her to take his charge and float with her. When they came out he asked for Rudr's permission. She pouts but rush to his cabin. Looking her Rudr also smiled back.


'Prachi,what a pleasent surprize. How r u?',Rudr showing his happiness looking her.


'bhaiya i want to take this buddhu with me but he is asking for ur permission. Told him he is coming with me and baki sabse main sunday ko aaungi milne.',she commanda him.


'hmm so to came only for him. Ok fine go.',he allowed both.',Prachi hugged Rudr giving him thanx and again rush with Veer outside. Rudr smile wide seeing both and indulge again in his work.


Remaining whole day Veer spend with Prachi. She is his childhood friend. Her parents have a friendly relation with Veer's parents. Veer came late and all start teasing him as Rudr tells them about Prachi's arrival.


'common mom atleast aap to mera sath do.',he cribbed

'ha to son i am with you. We know both of u from childhood and frankly speaking we all want her here as our daughter in law.',she caress his hairs lovingly.



'mom she is mad so dont take her seriously ok. Or waise b jab mujhe koi ladki pasand aayegi main sabse pehle apko btaunga.',Veer cleared her. All made antics and again get busy with dinner.



In office their cold war is going on. Time to time they grab a chance to show other down. Worst is when they stoop so low in presentation meeting. Veer wont able to gave much time to project because of Prachi and Ananya took benefit of this. She wont tell him anything in detail. Veer try harder but when it comes to presentation he wont have anything to present. Aaditya glared him and get angry. Rudr too disappoint with his carelessness. Saksham and Adhiraaj smiled wickedl coz when it comes to bussiness Aadity wont hera any excuses. Clients getting disappointed. Then Ananya gave the presentation and solve company's problem but frustration between both of them rising day by day.


Veer reached at home and threw out his frustration in his private gym. He hit the punching bag so hard as he putting his all anger on it. Saskhi was passing off the room and saw him. She get tensed seeing him like that. She knew something going wrong with him. Sakshi entered inside when he threw down the bag with full force. Sakshi scared for him. She never saw him in as much anger. Sakshi went to him and turned him to her. His eyes was so restless and filled with pain. Seeing his mother he hugged her wanna absorb in his mother's lap.

Sakshi stroking his back and he falls down on floor having tear in his eyes. She snuggle him and can feel his uneven heartbeat. She trying to calm him but no use. She is unable to help him. In only one month his son is changed completely. The thing bothering him soo much is out of his reach. He is struggling with himself daily and now it reached to its peak. Sakshi snuggled him tight and hear each and every word he says in his agony. Sakshi turned shocked with his condition. She dosent able to understand how she calmed her son. Night is sooo long for her and Veer. Somehow she managed to make him sleep. When he slept in his room his mother tugged him under duvet and turn off the lights after kissing on his hairs.


Veer slept but not Sakshi. His words still banging her head badly. She tossing on her bed whole night thinking about him only. She wants her son happiness at any cost.




Few more days passed. Veer completely start ignoring Ananya. Neither he talk nor he argued. After two months Veer's birthday arrived. Sakshi wished him first then whole family do one by one. Prachi came,kissed and hugged him tightly. All decide to organised a grand party for this ocassion. Rudr orderd Ananya to organised a grand party. He wants everything perfect for him. Though she dont want to do but for Rudr's sake she will agreed and arranged each and everything just more then perfect.


Party is almost unbelievably luxurious. Guests marved over their luxurious cars. Liquir flows freely and the youth guests enjoyed it with loud music. The crowd grows rowdier and louder as more and more guests get drunk. Ananya is here too but only to look forwrd for Rudr. All youngesters enjoyed. After he cuts cake and gave first bite to Rudr,party turn mad. Rudr came on dance floor with Ananya and she felt like on heaven. Prachi also invite Veer for dance but he denied and went to bar. He engulf many glass back to back.


Both Rudr and Ananya get tired and came to grab some soft drinks. Waiter goes to them and offer a drink to both Ananya denied taking it and Rudr drank both glasses as he is very thursty. Ananya blindly look all around and her eyes struck on Veer who is staring her continusely. She felt awkward the way he staring her from the baar.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART - 7


ANANYA felt suffocated with his gaze so she turned to other side. Again she turned where Veer is sitting but he is vanished. She turn stunned coz he is nowhere. She felt sighed. Rudr too decided to leave from the party hall as his head start spinning suddenly. He is loosing his balance.



'Ananya i dont felt better. Trust me i only drank one glass but still my head is spinning.i wont go back home in this condition.',he told in his intoxinated state to Ananya.


Ananya also dont want he go like this so she quickly arranged one room in hotel for him. He wont able to walk properly so Ananya take him her strength and walked with him to his room. Both entered and she locked the door. Ananya made him sit on a bed and removed his jacket and shoes. Rudr loosing his sences gradually. Ananya made him laid and stood up for leaving when he clenched her wrist and stops her. Ananya slanted her neck to look back him. He was looking at her with his dizzy eyes. Ananya stops and sat next to him. She caress his cheeks and he sat back. Rudr lost completely and hugged her in his intoxic state. Ananya felt strange but her love for him forced her to respond back. She hugged him back with all her love. Rudr start placing untamed kisses on her delicate neckline. She lossing herself in his touch. She wants to stop him but everything seemed so perfect that she cant denied. She loves him and today her love is with her. Rudr broken the hug and pecked on her petal lips. She cupped his face and waved with him. Both lost in this weak moment. Garment by garment both drop everything and Rudr bring her bneath him. He parted her legs and taken her virginity. She clenched the sheet bneath her and closed her eyes feeling his pace moments against her.



Both reached to their climax and Rudr slipped besides her. Both intimated but in intoxic moment. Ananya felt complete today. Both slept soon.




Next morning when Ananya waked up Rudr is not laying next to him. He leave a note in which he told that he is leaving for some urgent work. and paid a bill of room alredy. Then she only realized how late she woke up. Glimpse of last night is still fresh in her mind and made her flushed. She went to washroom and freshnup first then she dressed up and leave the room. First she went to her house,changed her clothes and reached to office. Rudr is very busy so avoid talking her for whole day. Ananya wont mind as he was busy with his clients. Though she was dying to talk to him but clamed herself. Ananya get herself busy with her work.



Next day she got to know that Rudr went on official trip for whole month. Ananya felt sad as he leave without talking to her. Ananya turned gloomed because Rudr avoid her phone calls too. If talks her then hardly for few sec just for bussiness sake. Veer noticed her daily she wont behaved like before. All other too noticed her changed behaviour. Pia her best friend ask for the reason and she told her everything. Pia get tensed for her but Ananya have full faith on him.


Aftr one month Rudr came back an her lost smile too. She get excited to see him back after a whole month and now she wont miss a chance to talk to him. Ananya trashed his door and entered in his cabin. Rudr get tensed. His face turn faded seeing her. Ananya hugged him but soon she step back as Rudr not anticipated. She glance in his eyes which is full of remorse.


'what happened Rudr? Why you avoiding me? Pata hai us raat k...',before she completes Rudr cuts him in between.


'Ananya pls dont remind me. I already regrats sevral times. Ananya you are my best friend tumhare sath aisa karne ka mujhe koi haq nahi tha',heis voice is trembling and lashes lower down.



Ananya broked with his confession she cupped his face and made him look at her.'pls Rudr dont said like this I love you and that night was most beautiful in my life.'



Rudr removed her hands and broke her dream with his harsh words.'Pls Ananya dont behave like a child. I wont love u. u r only my best friend. I love only Shivangi and soon going to marry her. Our families are happy we are happy. Pls Ananya dont create problems. I admitt it was all my mistake,but it doesnt mean i will pay for that lifetime. I m sorry Ananya but for me u r not more than a friend.'



ananya broked completely. Tears shed down from her almond eyes. Her love her life rejects her fully. Now she wont left anything in her life. Ananya rushed out of his cabin and collapsed with Veer. Both glance in each other's eyes. She gave him a destful look from her teary eyes and run away from there.


Veer's eyes filled with pain again seeing her crying. He overheared their convo and now he knows the whole truth...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
DI UPDATE ACCHI THI BUT IM NT HAPPY K SHES GETTING INTIMATE WID RUDRA
HOW PAINFUL IT WAS FOR VEER
BUT ALSO FEELING BAD 4 ANANYA BCZ REJECTION KYA HOTA I KNW VERY WELL
RUDRA IS REALLY A JERK HE DESERVES A TIGHT SLAP
HOW HE COULD SAY THT HE WILL NT PAY 4 HIS MISTAKE , ITS D DUTY OF HIM.
ANYWAY I LIKED PART BUT FEEL NHI AAYA SACCHI


1 CHEEZ TO BHOOL HI GAI I M TOTALLY CONFUSED THT Y VEER WS SO SAD N BEHAVING LIKE HEART BROKEN?????



UD SOON
LOVE U

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: darshika121

<font color="#FF0000" size="3"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">DI UPDATE ACCHI THI BUT IM NT HAPPY K SHES GETTING INTIMATE WID RUDRA
HOW PAINFUL IT WAS FOR VEER
BUT ALSO FEELING BAD 4 ANANYA BCZ REJECTION KYA HOTA I KNW VERY WELL
RUDRA IS REALLY A JERK HE DESERVES A TIGHT SLAP
HOW HE COULD SAY THT HE WILL NT PAY 4 HIS MISTAKE , ITS D DUTY OF HIM.
ANYWAY I LIKED PART BUT FEEL NHI AAYA SACCHI


1 CHEEZ TO BHOOL HI GAI I M TOTALLY CONFUSED THT Y VEER WS SO SAD N BEHAVING LIKE HEART BROKEN?????



UD SOON
LOVE U</font>
</font>


kya feel nahi aaya sweety? 😲 andabout ur que abi to is story me bahut kuchh aisa hai jo saamne aana baki hai cutieee 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Geethanda87

nice update... dono ki nok jhok its too gud... waise bhi pyar ki pehli nishani hi ladai hoti hai😊

thanx dear :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: lovemaaneet90

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Wow double update yipeee

Finally ananya comes to knw that veer is rudr younger
brother and she is shocked

Veer finally meet his family

Aaditya and rudr cribbing that veer is getting more
attension

Sakhsham is jealous of veer nd veer also dont like him

Veer is impressed with the interior of his cbin but d
moment he cmes to knw it is designed by ananya he asked rudr to change it

Kya nam diya veer ne ananya ko nakchidi bandariya

Both started fighting in frnt of rudr nd rudr is confused
wat is happening nd even whole staff is watching

Kya jawab diya veer ne ke agar tum akhri ladki bi ho gi
to bi ni chuhu ga

Ohhh ananya loves rudr mjhe laga tha ke vo pyar karti hai
par aj khud bola to yakeen hua

Veer nd ananya again fight in d cafeteria

But ananya did nt do it intentionally it ws by mistake

Rudr called both of them to his cabin

Lets c wat happens

Superb update baby


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thanx baby :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Asyalover

oh my...they are still fighting...thanks 4 the pm

wlcm dear :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: KINGKHANFAN

<font color="#FF0000" size="3">nice update...
dono ki nok jhok its too gud..loved it</font>

thanx dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: aditimaan

omggg ye dono itna jagra kaise kar sakta hai?maaneet ko bi har manaya.btw superb ud.waiting 4 ud 4 long.do snakes jo hain usko cut kar de.nd ananya loves rudra?bt what about rudra?

thanx sweety 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

...😛howz u???4 PMing me...😃u r done[/URL]...👏👏4 ur awessome work...me just[STRONG]...😛[STRONG]lots of[IMG=http://dl.glitter-graphics.net/pub/1510/1510691b4ubf7xxgd.gif]" /></font>

thanx dear

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