Arhi : Monsoon Rain - Page 89

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U r there kavi... Update in anew thread

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Chapter 5:

Firstly, I must applaud you for bringing in the aspect of insecurity of women in Delhi like you did. What made the whole thing even more brilliant was how you weaved in Arnav's view of women thereby clearing the misunderstanding at least I've been holding about him and simulataneously balancing the whole situation by bringing in the harassment guys can face too. It is a terrible world for women indeed but we cannot take an essentialist view that "All men are bad and all women are good". The Ria Malhotras do exist too, how ever small in number and people like Arnav do suffer. But the situation in Delhi is just appalling. Even at public bus stands if one is waiting for transportation at even 8p.m, cars will stop and flash lights and what not. Apparently these men think that anyone who steps out after dark is a hooker! Sad to say not much has changed despite recent developments. Yet hope remains alive as does the struggle.

Ok...I got a little carried away but it is something we all feel strongly about and you weaved it into your story wonderfully :) Now getting to the rest of the chapter. SO much has happened in one chapter and their relationship has taken a completely new turn. Jumping with excitement and don't know where to start!

So Arnav does remember? My original guess was right. Yay! And because of her fiery speech. Of course she's his feisty angel :) But poker face sure has a new standard set. I mean the guy gave out no clue uptil this point that he knew her. What he also seems to remember is her designing skill. Because Arnav Singh Raizada, not even in love, would never entrust anyone with such a responsibility if he did not think them capable. In addition to the fact that he has witnessed her efficiency first hand. That coffee might have helped a bit too.😛 It's funny how they barely know each other but he discusses his thought process and vulnerabilities so easily. Even earlier he very easily answered her about why he came into the fashion business. Natural connection!

Finally, finally Khushi is starting to connect the dots and see why he yells at her when she not working. Though she didn't get that it wasn't just because she wasn't at her desk but also because of who she was with. But totally right about why he stayed back. Awfully sweet how he comforted her on that road and actually felt her pain and of women in general. And then distracted her from the whole thing. Real softie at heart he is :) Protective too with the water tank, then worrying about her dupatta while she was driving and now escorting her to Chandni Chowk. Although the Chandni Chowk trip is not just to protect her I'm sure. 😉That reminds me - is this neighbour Suraj also in love with Khushi? Just curious. The poor guy gets his heart broken everytime. Sorry, I'm so random.😆

Last time Arnav checked out wet Khushi. This time Khushi got to check out wet Arnav. And boss, aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai! I'll melt when the volcano actually explodes. I bet he noticed when she went into that trance over his wet self. Specially chose a white kurta for him too. Oh Khushi you're in too deep already. Better get used to the strange sensations evoked by Arnav, they are here to stay.

Arnav's sense of his inadequacies is deep rooted it seems, given the fact that he constantly needs to achieve milestones. Not to say one cannot be generally be ambitious but going back to when he wondered if it would ever be enough because of how he started out, it does seem like he's trying to prove something to himself.

This Khushi will get into trouble again. When temper wale uncle Raizada finds out she's doing the designs for Lavanya, he'll blast both of them. She should really know better than to lie to him. But Khushi is Khushi. Jumps into tanks to save kittens. Secretly designs for high handed people like Lavanya.

Btw, her instinct was to call Arnav when she was in trouble. Unconsciously or consciously, she trust him the most. At that point she didn't even know the real "seductive siren" story. I would go to Arnav and say, " She called you, NOT NK!!" . Uska mind toh NK par hi atka rehta hai. (Ok I know he was calling her, so she might just have called him because his number was right there but I will believe what I have written. Because I know it's true😛.)

Man! You ended with that husky kohl comment. And I can only wonder what will happen in Chandni Chowk. So so looking forward to it. One thing that will surely happen is a jalebi attack by Khushi. Also wondering if Arnav changed because if he walks into his house in a kurta, Anjali sure will catch on that something weird is going on.

It was such a thrill to read four awesome chapters in a row. Your story makes my heart flutter like anything and this was just such a treat. Though it also makes me regret that I've been away from this all this while. I really am sorry for being away but it couldn't be helped. Life and its many ways. I hope you do forgive my disappearance. It was entirely my loss.

Can't wait for the next one!!! Thankfully it will be up tomorrow. So excited.

Thank you so much!!

P.S. Sorry for ranting on so much. Got too excited and carried away!