Swaron[TANHA] SS: Love, is it forever ? :: Chapter 5 UPDATED

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

yaar kamal ka likhte ho!!

mindblowing!!

this is freaking awesome!!!

loved it!!

poor sharon!!

your team rocks!!

ty for the pm.

Edited by raj_tanha_fan - 12 years ago

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

read both chapters in one go..
n both parts are awesome..
seriously first write up i doubt😉
yipee swaron were married already..
kria love rey whose dad is enemy of swayam..
now that is big problem..
loved how sharon wear that special dress just to get swayam attention..
aww that kiss😳
Mr.singhania😡
he can't be trusted yaar..
hope sharon reject his proposal but doubt she do that..
defintely that will create big problem between swaron coz swayam didnot complete what he was in middle of.. may be that project is very important..
plz update soon..
n plz pm me:)

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pooja123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

tooo good...

update soon!

want to know sharons decision!

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Amazing SS...nicely penned down 😊

liked how sharon distracted swayam ..and swayam lost in her😳

lovely update ..great work !!!

looking forward for next update:)

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

HMMM talenttt... WAAh hum tooo loving it tooo much jii

thankk uh... pm n sorry ji late ho gye

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Sanskriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Awesome update 😊

Beautifully penned

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keep guessing =P

@DaShInG_DeViL

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

I am so sorry for the late comment guys

The update was so amazing...I really like the way its going...starts with a calm romantic setting and ends with a bang and no dragging..amazing

You guys are doing an amazing job.

coming to the update hahah i like the fact that Sharon like to go shopping alone so much like Diva she will buy what she wants <3

haha swayam should have known better than to ignore his dear wife he knows pretty well what happens when the siren goes off ;P

I loved the fact that sharon wore the dress swayam gifted her and the mention of scenes happened in the show gives it a different feeling.

okay Sharon should not accept the offer my Mr singhania whose introduction in the story in a great idea I have yet to read a story on swaron in which one of the father's is involved in a negative/grey shade :)

coming back to sharon she should not accept the offer, her delima is right and she is right that swayam might get many more projects in future but whats the guarabtee, he already started from scratch once and more over the hard work going into this project, she should take into consideration all of that.

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Rae

@sweetbutbroken

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

ummm... WOW again!!

tum logo ne yeh talent pehle kyun nahi dikhaya 😲 you're all super amazing

acha mujhe yeh batao... how do u guys write this SS?? One chapter each? ya phir sab ek saath chapter likhte hai?

either way it is AMAZING!!! I'm loving it so much and I'm sorry i took so long to read and comment (personal problems)... but I'm back on IF now... at least for a while... so please do update soon so I can read more...

miss you all a lot... 🤗 par main IF pe sirf 10min intervals ke liye aa sakti hoon... parents rules... so lets see hopefully we can chat soon...

continue the amazing work and i look forward to reading more
love,

Rae

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: llyrics
Omg...somi oin anu😲 Vibss 🤗 Finally you commented

Cha gae... Hidden talent ...huh huh ??!!!!

U write so beautifully...(whoever wrote this chapter😳) ..thankuuu 😳

First ss...I dhought
Coming to the ss... Sharon and swayam are married ...always wanted that😳.. The two just care for each other -- me to like married swaron😳

Kria's back with a dhamaka😆... Bechari sharon fasss Gai... Hope something more interesting is to come

Loved it waiting for the next... And ya tell me who has written this and who is going to write the next one??! - It ijj a team work

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Pankhuri295
I'm blown away yet again 😆 ... then why are you laughing😡 😛...bt this time by the mischievous Sharon... Awww how she herself became the hunted...and how our very own lover boy gets lost his siren Sharon ..ahem ahem lover boy😆
And that 🤬Singhania...uski toh...😡...I hope Sharon rejects his offer... Bt how can I hope anything when the thing is in the hands of you guys...kuch na kuch teda hi karoge 😆 ... you know us very well😛
I want the update fast 😉 .. You will get it 😳