Swaron[TANHA] SS: Love, is it forever ? :: Chapter 5 UPDATED - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: lassipriya

res

unres

loved d naughty sharon teasing swayam.. it was cute.. it reminded me of dat episode...I really hope Sharon doesn't take up the offer..
good going guysšŸ‘šŸ¼

Thanks Lassi for the comment..you liked that scene even we do thats why we included herešŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Hehe, I loved how Sharon sneakily wore the Salsa dance to get Swayam's attention back on her and it's sweet how she always ends up giving to Swayam. I really hope Sharon doesn't take up Mr.Singhania's offer cause I'm sure something bad will happen to SwaRon cause of it !!

Abby šŸ¤— Thanks for commenting.. Glad you liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: austen4ever

res😃

done finally
well where do i start.
everytime i see ur draft in my inbox i feel like a 5 yr old going to disneyland. this update is fab as i knew it would be.šŸ¤— ...
the singhania sr touch is genius and d comments prove that,great going girl!
thank you anu for making somi include mischevious sharon.glad to have you on my time
funny thing is even though i know exactly whats going to happen i can still feel those butterflies in my stomach.
you rock girl and m so thankful for having come to the AT and met you.

Oin šŸ¤— Partner
without your inputs and correction this SS would be pheeka
You know hard it was for me to write that mischievous sharon part 😳 that was the only part i left in the first draft 🤣
Glad I met you and tricked you two to join this SS šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: anodaksgfan

Oh d next chap is up...


res for dat

oh loved d part...
and sharon was too good..
I love dat salsa dress..hehe

Glad you liked it ..we too love salsa dress 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

res...

unres


omg somi nd others 2


chapter 2

is suparb dress lake fir husband se pooch rhai ha...

nd pratap singhaniya is such a cheep i knw he is up to something...

nd sharon is geting emotional 4 kriya but she has 2 thought about swayam. alsond pratap singhnata is lying ...nd this project is veryy imp 4 swayam also... if sh does smthing wrong it becam difficult 4 sw

Anmol ..happy that you liked the update !!!
Keep guessing the plot šŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: an_skyfighter


i always love the mischievous diva and this is no different it was very funny how she teased swayam and he being the majnu he is gave in very quickly,
Ana šŸ¤—
We had loved mischievous Diva in D3 hence thought of writing in that line
and i really like the explanation of how the diva has mellowed down and why so šŸ‘šŸ¼ .. thanks 😳
but plzz dont make her give that guy the quotations !! i know the plot has to move forward and u need twists and turns
but as sharon said she would be lying to swayam... I know 😈
anyways as i say u people aint first time writers šŸ˜› so this is also very well penned and update soon
-again we are first time writers😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: smartypantstanu

wow! That was awesome.. šŸ‘

A mischievous Sharon is always fun to read... 😳 .
Swayam getting lost in Sharon is always a treat to read
I'm liking Mr.Singhania's element that's been added
Sharon being the root of the story is really promising
Can't wait to read what happens ahead
Please continue soon and Do PM me 😃
You'll are up with some amazing job šŸ‘šŸ¼


P.S Thanks for the PM

Glad you liked our story and work !!! hope we disappoint you 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arch2012

Somi & Oin šŸ¤— mere do anmol ratan ek ram hai to dusra lakhan. šŸ˜† ... šŸ˜›šŸ˜†
Super hit duper hit awesome work n beautifully written šŸ‘
loved the way u guys described the importance of dat pink salda dress which played an imp. role in Swaron lovestory. 😳 show mein to kabi pata nahi chala ki kaise or kyun Sharon ne agnipath ki tarah us dress ko phukne se bachaya tha . .. I know D3 focussed less on that ,..we will make sure that we will include whatever D3 sidelined šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
Loved that sharon destracting Swayam wid her cute antics bt majnu baba ka love mode switch jab on hota hai to rokna mushkil hi nahi na mumkin hai my lordd šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰
Swaron kiss ke liye phir se thank u hai ji. 😃 ...😔piche hi pad gayi thi toh kya karti ..include karna pada 😳
So papa papi chirkut ki entry ho gayi😔. Let's see where dis deal lead this story or more imp. relation of swaron .
Jaane ke liye padhte rahiye this ss. ...šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
Update soon šŸ˜› šŸ˜›


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