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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update meera!
U didn't have to worry..you were awesome as always.😛
Two things which stood..Arnav's confession..OMG!! he actually said that he can picture himself going for saree shopping for the rest of his life..who does that yaar! n the other kiss one..coz when he kisses her, he does not want to kiss anyone else..aww!! totally adorable..
And the other thing was Khushi..haha..that you are not playing fair vala dialogue..soo khushi..never to take a second place in anything..taking his collar 3 times..loved it!
absolutely loved it..but i am also feeling sad that this will end in a few updates..i soo dont want that..please dont finish it..😭😭
Edited by shopaholicloves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Still me *blushing*

If this is the state after reading your nervous updates means I want you to be more nervous in every update. ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 31 and 32...i loved the way the moments progressed...it was innocent it was beautiful it was sexy... and everything was LOVE
the word LOVE seriously worth a lot
simply amazing..loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited comment Here
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Posted: 12 years ago
A simple awoval of love and the passionate aftermath . Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
You know the guys who top the exams always say this "I m nervous n I think I have not written the exam well enough (for centum)" --- that's what your nervousness was about meera... So don't mind when you feel nervous next time --- it's nothing but winners jitters :)... people who excel in what they do always have it...

That was yet another beautiful update written so perfectly... When I was expecting them to do it in this chapter, the love confessions came in totally as surprise... Swami told it on a flow and that felt apt for his characterization... He was always in love with her as he was clearly just not smitten but had emotionally been pinned along with her for a long time now... The way he confessed what he felt about her n why her was simply beautiful Meera... Felt as if it was straight out of his heart n it left a great impact after reading... But I dint feel as much with khushi's confession... Was it too early for her??? May be not... But to me here swami has more depth n truth in his words than her... It might be because her character was built up that way n she was required to shell in what she actually felt a lot of times in the past... N may be I am as usual partial towards Swami n the jealous quotient is making me not take khushi's love in the right way 😉

"P.s. I love you" : it is one of my most favorite movies and I have read somewhere that it is Barun's favorite too... N meera you had chosen a very apt title there... Loved it and I hope you know that we all love you so much for giving us such an wonderful ARSHI story

PS: I love you :)
Edited by preethi.saseeda - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just realized I never commented after reading the last chapter!!

Everything was written so beautifully and it was brilliant...there was no reason for you to be nervous!

The love confession on both sides was just great, one of the best confessions of love I have read, especially from Arnav's side...and the way you wrote the passion between the two was also amazing.

Can't wait to see what happens next between these two😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!! Did they just confess!??

And here i was thinking that they will take forever to realise that what they share is much more than just attraction/lust, let alone confess that they 'love' each other!

Loved it when khushi pulled his collar to conferm what he said was true or not! 😆

...and then there was sex! 😳 they finaly gave in to their desires! No sexual tension in the air anymore...just pure love and pleasure ofcourse! 😉

u dont have to be nervous abt the chappy! It came out beautifully, like always! 😃

waiting for the next update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Comment on Ch 31 and 32:

SKDs ho toh aisi!

What can I say, I just loved their day together in the City of Joy. The saree shopping and subsequent rabba veys were the stuff that fantasies are made of!
Their conversation in this chapter made me realize that Arnav is still holding a part of himself back. (His unfinished story)
And that makes me wonder, when will he let go completely?

In the next chapter he confesses his love, and may I just say that it was one of the most natural confessions ever. That part was written brilliantly!

And so was the love-making scene that followed.
The sexual tension has been building for a long, long time, and the culmination was worthy of all that pent-up heat!

And now I am waiting for the next part of their journey.
Will Khushi return to Mumbai?

Tuesday ka wait kareka padi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
comments for chapter 31 and 32!

ohh why you all writer log are making me so edgy ya? one is making me to go gaga over Mumbai and you came with CITY OF JOY! feeling so helpless! beautiful places and i am so far away#sigh! well, i love all your depiction of Kolkata. the way you write about the streets and all. AND then our hero and heroine, arent they adorable like really!

i so lau roshogulla! and that whole shopping spree! its so calm! like the calm before the storm or i should say"calm before the pashun"!

this flippant is something for whom i can die for, really!

i just love the way he tried to calm her and get over her Writer's Block!

and then the making love dun ya?

passoinate and confessionate !

finally the confession, much awaited!

and the comnsummation much awaited!

loved these two the most!

a👍🏼 and a👏 to you and your writing!


i was humming this when i was reading...

mere hath mein tera hath ho...
saari jannatein mere sath ho...
tu jo sath ho...
fir kya ye jahan...
tere pyaar mein...
ho jaun Fanaa...

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