ArShi TS:Mention Not!!Part 3 10/8 Pg17 *Completed* - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Read both part in one go...superb update yaar loved it specially ending part.
Khushi become so nervous by seeing her father...and in nervousness she doesn't realize when arnav says i love u to her...hilarious😆
all updates are mind- blowing
keep it up👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Sooo cute...
I loved the way Arnav noticed Khushi...and later was crazy for her...

In the cafe i like it when Khushi said dat she to come as Arnav had messaged her...

Poor Arnie..he was already worried to confess the daughter and on top een the father reached!!...

Lol mention not , mention not, ke khel me.. Arnav confesssed !!!!...
:o
i loved dat <3

cant wait for Khushi s reaction...
Hope she doesnt refuse...it'll be fun to see Arshi secretly dating each other...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
loved the update...
it was awesome...loved the plot...
Khushi always ran away from Arnav and poor Arnav cud never say anything 2 her...
finally Arnav confessed his feelings...
loved i when Arnav said I LOVE YOU and Khushi said MENTION NOT...
awesome...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
wow,
i really really liked this!!
plx continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
amazing update
loved loved it
hahah Khushi's mention not
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
mention not update is just awesummm
thx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Nice one.
Loved it.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
awesomeee update👏
lovedd ittt😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Awesome update
Haye..he finally said he loves her 😳
Lovely 😃
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Part - 3

"Khushi wait" Arnav screamed while Khushi preferred to walk forward. Finally he got angry and grabbed her arm and pulled her harshly towards him. She winced in pain, but for time being it didn't matter to him.

"What the hell Arnav, leave me...I have to reach home before Papa see's me here" She tried to go from his grip but she couldn't. He finally left her when he saw tears in her eyes. He cupped her face and looked in her eyes

" Khushi...please try and understand, I knoe that u also love me...then why...are...u behaving so" Initially shocked she turned her face other way and moved from his grip.

"Arnav, u know...I mean we cant be together" He frowned and pulled her near him.

"Why? Why are u saying so? I know very well that u love me too" She looked at him and closed her eyes.

"I cant...I can't Arnav, because Past will always remain past. Once I had fallen for u, but now I cant" He left her hand and he looked at her with disbelief.

''What happened so Khushi...that u are behaving like this?" He asked her and she looked down. He brought her chin up and she hugged him suddenly shocking him. She started crying and he broke the hug and wiped her tears.

"Hey, why are u crying?" She smiled and hugged him

''I thought u didnt love me...I came to tell u also, but after Shreya proposed u" He broke the hug and looked at her.

"Khushi...I always loved u only Khushi, and will always. And whatever happened in the farewell even I dint knew she would do so. See me and Shreya were always just friends...I never loved her but only loved u. I wanted to say it but I never had courage. In fact I thought to propose u on the farewell day because I knew that u wont be able to run from me that day. But before I could do it Shreya came and messed up everything. I said her also that I never saw her in that way I see u. Then I came searching u but I guess u were gone" She smiled and went and sat on the bonnet of his car.

"And I thought that u never loved me and I was the one fool who always went back of u...even when I said Jiya, she was so angry on me and said me that "Jiji love and all always happen in films, we always get happy ending in films only" and I laughed hearing that" He came and joined and they both lied down on the bonnet of the car.

"U know Khushi...4 years, these 4 years I know how slept knowing the fact that u were in the same city but I couldn't find u, in fact I even came to meet u once...but the neighbour's said that u and ur family left from there after ur exam was over"

''Yah...actually Papa lost his job and I had to earn income for my family. Jiya was in 6th standard and Ma always used to stay ill. So we shifted from Laxmi Nagar" She smiled and he hugged her suddenly . He broke the hug and brought her down and knelt down on his knees.

"So if everything is sorted between us...Miss Khushi Kumaro Gupta, would u prefer to change ur name to Mrs. Khushi Raizada?" She smiled and was going to give her hand when she stopped and saw her Papa standing infront of her. She looked at Arnav and he got up and turned to find her Papa standing.

Arnav smiled and came foward and hugged Sashi Gupta and he did the same too. Khushi looked astonished and stared at them both blankly. Arnav turned and looked at Khushi.

"Uncle, I guess its time we say the truth to Khushi" Sashi laughed and came near Khushi. She looked at her Papa and he smiled and caressed her head.

"What's happening here? Papa u know Arnav?" He nodded yes and she looked at Arnav who was smiling seeing her so confused.

"Yah beta, I met Arnav in a conference when I went to Manali last month. There he said me about his true feelings about him towards u and I understood that he really loves u. Then he asked me for help and I coudnt deny!" She was more than shocked and her mouth was opened in oval shape.

"Kya? U both already knew each other...and here I thought how would I say to Papa about us" Khushi pretended to be angry and Arnav came and hugged her from side.

"What to do…I had to do so, or else I would have never met u" Arnav said and Sashi laughed. Khushi showed anger on her face and showed no mood to talk to them.

"Okay! I guess my daughter is angry, no worries I'll take care of it after going home" Sashi said and looked at Arnav and continued " But Arnav I thought u were gonna propose her in the Caf, then how come it happened that the plan didn't work out" Arnav chuckled and looked at Khushi who showed least interest in their talks.

"Well, uncle..i was planning to do so…But your Laadli Khushi ruined all of it" Khushi made and an oval shaped mouth and came and stood near her Papa.

"No wayz, if I had known that it was your and Papa's plan I would have never come out of the caf" Khushi said and Sashi started to walk leaving the couple to talk.

"Okay…so Khushi, I'm sorry…Please" He stressed on the word Sorry and she melted down with his gesture. She smiled and hugged him as tight as possible. They broke the hug and started laughing at each other. She tried to walk past him when he caught her hand and she turned back.

"Hey, I Love You!" She smiled and turned back.

"Mention Not, Mr. Raizada" Both laughed and they went towards their destiny or their new start which is New, Fresh and Never Ending.

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