(ArHi) When Passion & Fury Collide... *COMPLETE*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I had this though bubbling in my mind for a long time now. I just never got the time to pen it down and write it. I won't say much but this is the most passionate piece I have ever written. It was too long and I'm not sure whether I'll post the next part. If i get a good response like i did with 'Love & Khushi', then i will surely think about! :)

It is relatively short, but I needed closure from a particular scene from the show which had me on hooks ever since i saw it. I don't understand why but it bugged me consistently and I just had to let it out.

If manage to figure out which scene I'm referring to, do leave it in the comments below!

So here goes nothing! This is basically this kind of stuff I enjoy writing. I promise you now and always, that there will always be a happy ending! No matter how long it takes! ;)

Adios! :)

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When Passion & Fury Collide...


"You are not the most important person in my life Khushi'stop acting like it."

"There's no one more important to me than my Di'She means the world to me."

"I love you'but you cannot take her place."

"Because of you'she's worried that she would lose me."

"My Di'My Di'"

She splashed a handful of cold water onto her pale face, allowing her blood to circulate across as her usual rosy color filled her complexion.

She patted her face with her towel, cringing at the creases on her forehead and the dark circles around her doe shaped eyes.

Yes, she had cried a lot. He had hurt her. Yet, she refused to leave, she knew he loved her'she loved him too. It was her stubbornness and her will. She will never leave him. No matter what happens.

She walked out, wearing her dupatta around her neck, tying her hair up in a high chignon bun allowing her bangs to cover the stretch marks across her forehead.

She sat down in front of the mirror, assessing any lines or creases on her face. She was very self conscious of herself. She hated the way she looked, the way she talked, the way she moved. Then he walked into her life, filling it with color and vibrancy. He made her feel beautiful'she didn't hate herself any more'

She took out the little cylindrical box from her secret stash of products. She opened the lid carefully placing it onto her palm.

As she filled her maang with the crimson powder, she made a promise to herself.

No matter what happens'No matter who comes'she will never leave him..they were in this..together. Forever.

As Khushi Singh Raizada looked at herself through the mirror, she vowed, she'd never leave his side.

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Arnav forcefully applied pressure to the brakes of his SUV, carelessly driving across the abandoned road. He closed his eyes in frustration as sleep evaded his mind.

Visions of her face flashed across him. Her beautiful face'his love'his one true love'The only woman in the world he would bow down to.

How stupid had he been? It was always her'It was always going to be her.

What had he ever done to deserve such a demure, beautiful woman like her to be beside him?

He hated himself after the way he treated her. Last night'last night was terrible. He had given her so much pain. Yet, she stood there, absorbing all of it in, not saying a word.

She was truly the most selfless creature he had ever come across. He didn't deserve her. Simple as that.

As visions of them cuddled together, smiling, happy as always clouded his mind, he missed the truck approaching him in front.

But it was too late.

All he could hear was her bubbling laughter. Her voice engulfing his mind. His senses. Everything.

She WAS everything'

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.

And then everything went black.


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So How was it...?

Do leave your comments & feedback! It is highly appreciated! :)

Will only continue if you guys leave a comment and judge my stuff. Otherwise how will I know whether I write crap or not..? :P

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Till We meet again,

-Tasneem :)


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PART 2 - pg4

PART 3 - pg8

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rakenduvadana thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res


wow first to comment on this new ff


i have just reserved the comment simultaneously received ur pm


OMG arnav met with an accident


hope he is fine


interesting concept


would love to read more
Edited by madhusquare - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyyy awesome new ts
Already in love with jt
Poor khuhsi
Can't wait to see what he dose to rectify his mistake
Plz update the nxt part soon
Eagerly waiting to see what happens next
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsom blossom now dis is intrsting...ah u updated somthing aftr wht cmz lyk centuries...nyhoo i hope u r back now...bahut chota chp tha...can't wait nxt chp sooon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept...wonder what will happen next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wait if he is on about khushi then why didnt he just tell her so
dont tell me car accident huh
dude cant you be careful for once please
his di rant shall be the death of us all one day though
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting continue soon please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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eager to know if Arnav's gonna be okay.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant !! I hope he is fine..khushi viewpoint was just too good..I want Arnav to be okay so that he can make up for all the wrOng he has done to her..please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting concept and I liked the title also 😊
Looking forward for more

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