OS: To Wish upon a Shooting Star

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Neen

@nnsunn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Amazing update. Beautifuly written. Thanks 4 pm

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Wow...
BRILLIANT... 👏
I loved your version of the 'Almost Kiss Scene' in IPK...
Very nice yaar...
Looking forward to read more... 😊

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Res-ing for now.Will update once I read the OS.

Which may not be for a few more days. Sorry! *holding ears*

*Edit*

Wait. You won an award for this???

Omedetou!!!

You deserve it!!! This OS was BEAUTIFUL!!

I loved how you took the events in the show and gave them such deep meaning! And do I need to tell you how floored I was when I read the modified kissing scene?

I always wanted to write/read that scene, modified.. and you nailed it!!!

Wonderful one shot!! Try and write more to it, if you can!

Edited by chibisuke - 12 years ago

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arshiyana

@arshiyana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

This os took me back to that very moment go IPK...

U wrote so beautifully of that moment n I loved the the way u ended story with happy...

Loved it

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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Great OS. I love how you tied up some scenes from IPK into this OS. It was like reliving IPK's magic in this tale. Arshi wished for a moment of love which they got and now Arnav is hoping to wish for something more.

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myriads

@myriads

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

missed my fav serial after reading this

u captured the iconic moments beautifully..

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Excellent os 👏 loved it 😊

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

hey i have no words for this...i usually dont read os...but i m happy i read this wonderful piece of work...i loved the way u used the ipk scences...they gave us a almost kiss...but u gave us a full fledged kiss.. beautifully written...

i lost the record how many times i have read this os..

Edited by khushboo1234 - 12 years ago

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

What would have happened if they had kissed on diwali? What turn would the story have taken then? Would denial and hurt still have been the only way out?

You answered these questions with need, hope and love.

Both of them wanted a moment of love, not a lifetime as they are too unfortunate to expect it. And you gave them a beautiful moment at that.

You recreated the sibling bond, the inexplicable feelings they feel for the other and the diwali night so well, so vividly. I wasn't reading this story, I was watching it.

If wishes were shooting stars, Arnav and Khushi would be together...

Of my entire time on this forum as a reader, silent or otherwise, this is the 3rd time I am asking a writer to continue an OS. Pls give me another part if possible. I want to see how Arnav will make things better.

I need to thank arshifan91 for recommending this story. 😊

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago