OS: To Wish upon a Shooting Star - Page 5

this was an overwhelming experience to read your OS, no don't think I am exaggerating because you have written what you felt about these scenes and the kiss was not missed so beautifully, I loved reading it, and here is one request please continue

First standing ovation to u 👏👍🏼 Wonderfully written OS 😃


It has been a long time since i have read such a story with deep emotions, love , hesitation, desperation and salvation !!!


The bond between the sisters were beautifully written. One helping the other to come out of the inner turmoil , misery and standing as a pillar of support to one another . In a similar manner was the bond between Arnav and Anjali. The way he remembers her with every word told by Anjali and feeling shocked for a second when she uttered Lavanya and then putting the mask of ASR to cover his slip of control , wishing for the sake of his sister at the same time hoping like a little child to get its wish come true were really the adorable moments .

The KISS What can i say about it . Its beyond imagination and u have fulfilled the wishes of millions of IPK fans by making them kiss 😃even after the intrusion of the call😡 . I was also one of the fangirls who cursed the caller(Aman) for interrupting such a magical moment. The way you have handled the story after the initial rejection was really magical. Their apprehensions, her pleadings, his acceptance, their kiss and lastly when the reality hits them, his promise to make everything fine and better and her belief and trust in him, i dunno what to say more about it !!😳


The porch scene, shooting star scene and the diwali scene of the show were amazingly described which made me bow down to your thoughts and narrations . You have really done a brilliant job than the CVs and have brought out the real essence of the show which captivated many fangirls like me !!

I too now long for a shooting star and gonna wish for my prince charming 😉😛

On the whole a picture perfect moment and a writing with eloquence 👏 and i wish u get an award in the IPK Newsletter at the earliest for your outstanding OS.


PS: Before watching IPK , i was unaware that there was something called shooting star and there is a belief that if we wish upon it , it will come true 😕 Sorry my science knowledge is a bit poor u see 😆

👍🏼 that was so perfect and i was enjoying it immensly till the point where Khushi says"thank you" to Arnav and my heart just broke inside n had tears... kyun dard hai itna... but Arnav's determination gave me hope and he waiting, wishing for a shooting star had me chuckling !!

Originally posted by: arshifan91

First standing ovation to u 👏👍🏼 Wonderfully written OS 😃


It has been a long time since i have read such a story with deep emotions, love , hesitation, desperation and salvation !!!


The bond between the sisters were beautifully written. One helping the other to come out of the inner turmoil , misery and standing as a pillar of support to one another . In a similar manner was the bond between Arnav and Anjali. The way he remembers her with every word told by Anjali and feeling shocked for a second when she uttered Lavanya and then putting the mask of ASR to cover his slip of control , wishing for the sake of his sister at the same time hoping like a little child to get its wish come true were really the adorable moments .

The KISS What can i say about it . Its beyond imagination and u have fulfilled the wishes of millions of IPK fans by making them kiss 😃even after the intrusion of the call😡 . I was also one of the fangirls who cursed the caller(Aman) for interrupting such a magical moment. The way you have handled the story after the initial rejection was really magical. Their apprehensions, her pleadings, his acceptance, their kiss and lastly when the reality hits them, his promise to make everything fine and better and her belief and trust in him, i dunno what to say more about it !!😳


The porch scene, shooting star scene and the diwali scene of the show were amazingly described which made me bow down to your thoughts and narrations . You have really done a brilliant job than the CVs and have brought out the real essence of the show which captivated many fangirls like me !!

I too now long for a shooting star and gonna wish for my prince charming 😉😛

On the whole a picture perfect moment and a writing with eloquence 👏 and i wish u get an award in the IPK Newsletter at the earliest for your outstanding OS.


PS: Before watching IPK , i was unaware that there was something called shooting star and there is a belief that if we wish upon it , it will come true 😕 Sorry my science knowledge is a bit poor u see 😆

Loved it Ana. And Happy Friendship day to you.

na that ws simply beautiful<3
so so..amazingly written!!
U took my heart away gal..!!<3

Ana, Loved loved loved this!

I wish Diwali had turned out like this??? Very nice OS. Thanks 4 pm../ Now come soon with IC.

A very very big thankyou for writing dis and a million thanks for sending the pm..Thankyou Ana !<3 I have not read anything dis beautiful before! You write with sheer brilliance! I am totally floored.. This Os was so simple yet so so so utterly beautiful..so full of love..emotions.. You have literally left me speechless and emotional.. I seriously wish to see a shooting star now!! and to wish the moment of love too as yours was so captivating..so beautiful that I want to live it though I did through ur os.. Its beyond beautiful..period! plz never stop writing.. You seriously are an inspiration<3 I wanted it to go on and on .. It was so soothing to read <3

Originally posted by: Anarocksick

Firstly, thank you so much for your comment and for taking out time to type out so many words. I absolutely loved it 🤗

@Bold1 - High five! I've never actually seen a shooting star myself but long to see one. How beautiful it must look.

@Bold2 - Okay...I'm truly overwhelmed here. I was not aware of the existence of such an award. But thank you for thinking that this OS of worthy of it. Means a lot <3

@Bold3 - It's actually not even a star but space waste I guess. But since the sight is so beautiful and rare, people make wishes when they see them. It's just a belief. Doesn't hold much scientific value 😊

Thanks again <3

You are most welcome , actually i was a silent reader and i have been active only for the past 4 - 5 months and i was also totally surprised by my writing skills as i was a person who hated writing essays in school and now i am truly overwhelmed by some of the talented writers in this forum which makes me pour out my emotions . So the credit goes to the writers who make me write about what i think of their stories . So many 🤗🤗 to u for writing such a piece .


Yes they are putting IPKKND newsletters which contains the summary of the episodes during the week and also some other novel concepts. It has one segment where writers are awarded for their OS and FF and this beautiful work is done by Zehra (lazyleaves). I have also scrapped her and her sister to read your OS. So u will see their comments sooonish 😃


Thanks for the info. I am a very weak science student though that was the subject i topped in 10th std (188/200) 😆


Hoping to hear more from u . And wishing to read some more beautiful pieces 😃