Hi Ana
This is the first time I am reading a story written by you and I must confess I love the way you write. Vandana Sagar suggested I read this story...and I thank her for this recommendation!🤗
Loved the concept--especially how you have woven the story around that night of the shooting star.
Loved the sisterly bonding and how you described their talk - the important stuff and the not-so-important stuff...I have a sister myself and can remember many many evenings spent doing just this - talking!!!😆
Loved how the Payal in your story is persistent about Khushi not being comfortable with the alliance with Syam...of course, Khushi being Khushi, does manage to smile and finally convince her Jiji that all is well! Khushi really could talk herself out of anything!!!😊 Loved how you put into words - how Khushi would know she'd met the right person for her- to be showered with flowers - not star, no not those "or she would get burnt" 😆 - loved how you infuse humor so subtly into the situation. Brilliant!
Loved how you refered to KKHH - really, Ana - was it really that long ago...😲 to me it feels like just yesterday...ouch! Time sure has flown!!! 😔
I loved how she wishes for a moment of love - with him! Loved it! That "ehsaas" she feels - she already acknowledges as love - loved how she is hoping for the inevitable--- dreams never come true, or do they?😉
Loved how you moved to Arnav - that scene with Arnav and Anjali on the show is one of my favorites - loved how you took that one scene and wove so many beautiful sibling moments - loved Arnav's recollecting the past - his Di telling him what to wish for (as an older sister, I am guilty of this too- telling my sister what to do and a lot more😆)- some happy sweet moments shared between siblings - well done!👏
And loved how he wishes for a moment of love too - for himself - unknowingly bringing two destinies together ...😊
The next part - Diwali - I never thought this scene could be topped ...ever- those moments between Arnav and Khushi were almost too sacred to touch... know what I mean?
Loved how you wove your own take on this and took it to another level! LOved the communication between Arnav and Khushi here - a dream, a wish fulfilled in part...leaving them and us wishing for more - hope is eternal!
Will you continue, Ana?
Would love to see where you take it from here...
😃
Sampoorna
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