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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Awesome prologue, beautiful but sad start to the story! Giving up the baby is like giving up one's soul and no one should go through that pain and suffering! I feel for that woman!

Please continue soon

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glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

That was a brilliant start for a first time FF writer. Your vivid description of the turmoil inside and outside took us right into the young mother's heart.

The imagery of the mother and child and the imminent seperation was very aptly reflected in the setting of the church where it was to take place. The poignant picture of the mother's pain and sorrow at giving up her most precious possession is haunting. Look forward to the story.

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

OMG!! you are such a wonderful writer👍🏼, the prologue is so to heart touching am definately gonna follow this FF..please pm me if you can..

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

awesome prologue
evenbefore start reading ur story ur banner attracted me so much
heartwrenching scene the mother has to leave her child
ur writing made me picture the scene in front me
waiting for the story to start its journey and iam very much interested to accompany till end

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IDatIF

@IDatIF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Wow that was an amazing start
Plz countinue soon

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Hey Sandhya,

I knew from your comments that you are a writer 😊

Glad that you started this story. You writing is as pure as they baby's brown eyes. I have always said you write beautifully and I will repeat it once again.

It will be interesting to know how this story unfolds.

Congratulations!!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Is it too early to ask for Chapter 1?

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Beautifully written with so much depth loved it
where were you before?
lady wants the baby to put in orphanage and the brown eyes held the purity of innocence
update soon
plz buddy me and pm me
tnx nids for recomending it

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Wonderful...
Loved your writing very intriguing so is the plot of your story very different.
A helpless mother who has to let go of her child felt very sorry for her.
will definitely wait for update please pm me.
thank you and thanks jenny to recommand it.

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