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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

interesting and very painful

read it as per meeras rec

pls add me n PM list

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dsbj

@dsbj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

wow! Brilliant.. Waiting for chapters.. Tnx for meera for recommendation..

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faree

@faree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

wow description is so vivid it like am watching a movie amazing pls update soon.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

It's a beautiful story! Pls continue soon and pm me with updates. I have added u to my buddy list! Thanks.

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basanti108

@basanti108

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

LOVED LOVED LOVED the beautiful description you have written...for a second I thought I was at that chapel. (Bit about me is that im dyslexic so the description really helps me to visualise the moment 😊)

Really enjoyed reading this prologue...I actually want to who the lady in the story, I doubt that it would be khushi (the mother) but it could be arnav mother?? and the baby arnav but if you are going to go by the actual IPKKND serial then the baby would be Khushi. I think this story can go in so many different directions...I really want to read more

But all in all beautiful start to the story and I must thank Nidhi (Nidsubh007) for recommending this story 😊

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Rekha

@Caskett

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Loved the prologue.Beautifully written.
Many mysteries, but I am sure that you will reveal them as you continue.
Continue soon.

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Page 10 and counting !!!🥳

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Ohhh cant wait to see why it happened

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Firstly Sandy, I love the banner.its amazing.

Then comes the prologue.

Never in my wildest dreams did I expect this, really.

Loved the air of meloncholy here.

And the rainfalling added its touch of mystery and sorrow.

As though God was weeping with her.

My guess is she is Arnav's mother as the baby has brown eyes.

But she could be Khushi too.

Loved the way the baby held on to her finger as though imploring her not to leave her and go.

An the old woman added the sinister touch.

The phone call! Who called her?

Will wait for you to unravel the mystery.

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Hi Sandhya :)
U r a 1st tym writter!!!!????
Unbelievable!!!
m intrigued wid the gripping prologue n wud love to follow the story :)
No assumptions.. wud go wid the flow :)

Plz do p.m me whn u nxt update :)

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