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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

The story starts with Anya Singh Raizada who has an older sister called Anjali ...hmmm interesting.

Anya meets Khushi and Payal and they are the three musketeers

I just love the name. You know why? When I was studying I lived in a hostel with my two room mates. We were also given the same name.

And just like Anya's mother I too believe yellow lights are better 😊

Will be waiting to know how the story takes a turn in the next chapter.

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Awsommmiiieee dis is intrsting da whole chp was based on Anya's POV & Anya myt be Arnav's 2nd sis...guess shez in boarding school n wht usuly happnz with newbies is shwn n der came an angel 4 hr rescue...how sweet...i luvd da way Anya's fears were shwn n den whn khushi came 2 help she described hr as 'Angel'...btw i wud luv if Anya call Khushi 'Angel' since she described hr lyk dat...nxt chp sooon!!!!

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

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sandhya i m a bit cnfusd in d charactrs and also d scene wich was going on

cn u hlp me in explaining so dat it will be asy for me 2 undrstnd

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago

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pooja_sanu

@pooja_sanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

loved the update n seriously angle n kushi was awesome loved it n i guess asr's lovable sis is anya isnt woow cant wait more loving it...thx for the pm!!!n cont... soon

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

A fabulos update...awesome start...so khushi and payal are Anya's friends...n I m assuming Anya is Arnav's sister...I m so excited...can't wait for the next update...plz keep me on your PM list thank u!!! :)

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Roopa

@roops82

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

the prologue was beautiful and heart touching..did the lady leave the infant in church???

chapter 1 was beautiful...anya, khushi and payal!!!!

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

A total 180 degree turn in the feel of the story! I love how you can make my imagination zing!

There's heartache to be had based on the prologue...and it was a rocky start for the characters in chapter 1...I'm hoping for a lighthearted one at some point! 😊

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Intersting to see how the friendship was forged.

Anya seem to have come from not so happy home after her mother passed away. Waiting for the next.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

I noticed Anya referring to Khushi as her Angel over and over again. Anya, the poor child.. her mother seems to have been suffering from some kind of illness, and then passed away few months back. Unimaginable.. the trauma the poor child must be going through. And now thrown into this boarding school away from friends and family.. sigh. Am I glad Khushi and Payal will be there for her! Looking forward to the three musketeers 😊

I loved your description of school life and adolescence... the taboo is that "boyfriends", seniors, friends, the need for acceptance.. sigh. I loved how you captured the whole first-day-at-school atmosphere from the eyes of this lovely but timid little child.

Loved it! Now waiting for the 14th...

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Hey sandhya , already loving these three musketeers here :) The bond that they have developed is so cute and looks like a long lasting one at that too . Me personally have no experience of a convent or a hostel but the way you described it was superb . It does not matter if it is a school , a convent or a boarding school , the anxiousness still remains if it is your first day at either :)

Poor Anya ... My heart went out for her . Glad she had friends like Khushi and Payal . You do need friends like that in your life . They don't judge you . They just embrace you as you are . Bas ...

And such a contrast to the prologue ... Wow that was great . Did not see this coming .

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