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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Omg loveddd the update
ufff tanya ki bachiii hoppe manvi teaches her a good lesson
but woahhh manvi a tough nut if shes never cried since then
i loved the way virat proposed from first line till last funny line
sooo cute n it seemed damn real
aaahhh precap is sooo excitinggg
plzzz update quickly cnt wait nw
thanz for pm 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
nice update tanya slap her front of everyone
and he was sitting and talking friendly way
to tanya update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
wow super update...
i really hate tanya...
manvi should teach her good lesson...
really excited for next update...
plzzz plzzz update soon...
and do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
awesome update
hate tanya she slapped maanvi
loved the update
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
hey i just read the story it was awesum loving it so much...👏👏

just cut the crap...foget virman ...first teach tanya a lesson😡😡...thn sumwer i will b in peace😆

pls pm me whn u update the next chappie...😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
heheh this is to cute... please pm me when you update :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
awesome update... i loved it...
update soon... pls pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
IPart 4:
Next day manvi was walkin to clas when she heard some noise frm the cheakin room she slowly put her head around the door n saw tanya stealing exam papers manvi smirked n got her phone out n took n picc
M:wooow tamya the tanya stealing papers wow the principle should like tje look of this
She was about to go when
Tanya:stop dont do that ill do watever u say
Manvi:really is it...watever I say...fine im going to clas now u have to say sorry to me plus in ur knees plus u have to baw down in respect when ever see me n GET OF MY SIT...is it understood.
Tanya was now angery but she had to to it sooo she followeed manvi to class.
Manvi stood near the teachers desk n then tanya came at her knees n begged for forgiveness
Manvi entered the class with tanya behind her
M:well evedy1 tanya here has something to say
Tnaya got on to her kness
T;im sorry manvi for wat I did yesterday trust me it wont happen again sorry plz forgive me
M:o tanya it ok
The hole class was laughing there head of n virat well he nearly fell off his chair
Manvi walked of to her seat
T(to herself):ur gonna pay manvi ur gonna pay big time
N she stomed off
V:omg that classic dude uff man gaya mein tumay
M:I am the best
V;o shit I forgot r u comin to rajs party today
M:have u never seen me say no to a party
V:true
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In the evening manvi got ready in a beautiful white dress that was above her knees n it had n black belt going through the middle.the dress was backless.she wore black heels n her hair was left lose...he di n jiju had already left n virat well she had no idea.
She came out the house n was about to get into her var when she heard soneone wisal.
She turned around n saw virat...standing near his car in whute jeans with a black t shirt smokin.
(Yeh virat n manvi smoke but sometime n just for fun)
Manvi walked towards him
M:wat are u still doing here
V:wanna lift
M:pee rari hai I dont take lift I have my own car
Saying this she took the cigarette out of his mouth n started smokin it.
V:f**k off the were late
M:o I see u wanted to walk in to the party with me...walkin in to a party with the hottest girl in skool
V:oye in ur dreams
M:then why u still here
V;f**k iff im going
The both got in to there cars.manvi was about to go when he horned she looked at him n all she coukd see was compatition it was a race n they both raced of to the party...
The party was in swing every1 was enjoying.
Manvi was sitting at the bar...she was lookin around when she saw virat dancing with some girl
Manvis blood starting boiling she didnt kniw why but she hated wat she saw...
She got up n stormed of to the dance floor n pulled that girl of of virat virat n manvi just looked at each other n the manvi stormed of out of the club virat followdd her
V:manvi manvi wats wrong
Manvi was quit
V:why did u do that n why u soo angery will answer me god damit why are u so angery I was just danc9ng
M:BECUZ I LOVE U
everything stopped for them right there they just started at each other..
V:wat
M:yes I love u I dont know whne why how
V:manvi u have lost it since when did u start believing in all this bullshit
M:my love is not bullshit
V:im sorry manvi I cant do this
M:wat do u mean
V:o plz manvi dont get soo emotional u know I dont believe in love then why
M:o soo ur not readyy to except me
V:no im sorry but I dont love u
M:u know the way u just broke my heart someone will also break ur heart n then ull know how it feels
N she ran of
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It had been a week sinse then...manvi had not got to college saying to her di that she doesnt feel well n when ever virat was in the house she would stay in her room...virika were finding this abit weird...viren had spoken to virat n virat told him everything...jeevika consolted manvi after finding out...but when viren told her that virat was less bothered she decied to move on if he wasnt bothered then neither would she bother...it was a monday morning n virika had already left for college manvi came out off her room wearing white shorts n a baby blue blouse with n white jacket plus white boot she was coming down the stair when she saw virat they looked at each other with anger filled eyez n made there way out to there cars...they got into there cars n looked at each other manvi smiled at him and they raced to college.
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It was dance class...
The principle came in
P:students attention
V(to his friends):lo agaya sala buda
Viren:virat shut up
P:students we have a inter skool compatition in which all the skools in the city will participate...every skool shall prepare a dance frm each skool one girl n one boy will do a duit ...me n ur dance teacher have decied that frm our skool the two students that shall participant will be virat
All the students started clapping
P:n the girl will be manvi
Virman looked at each other n soo did virika
J:o no viren wats gonna happen now
Viren:jeevika wait n watch
J:wat do u mean
Viren:means jaha kackrar hoti hai vahi par tu pyaar hota hai..
Jeevika though for a while n then looked at viren n smiled
J:ur a genious
Viren:now that I am
On the other hand manvi with her friends
M:I dont wanna do this im going to get my name out if this
__:scard are we
Manvi looked back n saw virat
V:scared aww manvis scared to dance with me
M:shut up no im not
V:then why u taking ur name back
M:im not
V;o really I just heard wat u said
M:just shut up im gonna dance with u happy
Virat came closer to her n in her ear he said.
V:every happy
N he walked of
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Uff finished now lets see how they dance with out killin each other...hihihi
Plz do like n comment.

Nia&krystal

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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
nice update so she purpose him
and tell him her feeling but
he reject her purpose waiting what will happen
some other guy come in her life then relise
his feeling toward waiting what happen in dance
competition and dear change the update no
so reader should get to know about u update
and Happy and Safe Diwali to u and u r family
Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awesome...update...!!
loved it...
the way maanvi said it all ws good...nw make virat also realise it soon...!!
continue soon ...waiting fr the PM...😉

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